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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 72)

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
very nice poem dear

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
That was just awesome ,so apt and feelings so well written

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 10:47am | IP Logged
it was nice..
loved it rumpu..
feel so good when u write ur lovely poems
keep writing them..
n from the title of ur pm to me
i have no intention ever to ignore it..
if i want i know i cant..
beautiful.   



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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arnie-girl

it was nice..
loved it rumpu..
feel so good when u write ur lovely poems
keep writing them..
n from the title of ur pm to me
i have no intention ever to ignore it..
if i want i know i cant..
beautiful.   



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no dear,no need to be sad...the msg is nt fr uSmile
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Anchoring in two closed eyes

 

Just you are with me

I'd trampled all hurdles of life

I've shared my stings of heart with you

I've got lost in your eyes

I've lost myself in your entity

I feel that I'm in heaven

In the garden of Aden with you.

 

...Dream...

 

Now,my eyes shining in yours are closed

I can't see you...

Do you see me,feel me,love me??

My heart stops which beats in you

My feelings get whitish without you

My heart becomes frozen...

 

...Why...

 

Be with me,my dear

I'll take off my vermilion

I'll throw out my ornaments

I'll never swear you

JUST BE WITH ME LIKE BEFORE.

 

At present

 

See my darling,I'm in my wedding attire

Please,don't leave me.

It's not you,just a corpse!!

Be with me my hubby

I'll love you the best I can.

I'll forget you if you want

 

...SOUND OF BLUE SILENCE.....



Edited by surprising - 09 July 2013 at 11:05am

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
beautiful..

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Beautiful poem

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