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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 68)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sohara

Mind blowing poem.
Whenever I hear, some demon molested an innocuous soul, my heart breaks into million pieces.
 A woman is a form of mother, a sister, a wife, a lover
A monster will also think twice to insult her.
A rapist is heinous than a monster.


yeah...no adjective is suitable fr them...some evil rogue!!

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _IcePrincess_

Nice one RumpuClap
Indeed, rape victims deserve more than just sympathy...I loved the last line - Spread ur dirty arms, we'll break them at once. That's exactly my attitude!




sure...but how far we can perform our duty towards them?
,,,,,,this must be the attitude of all of us...
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by medhasarkar

aami speechless----

rape victim's er poem was the best of ur works yet.

ami gorbo kori je ami meye----and i'm proud of u rumpu---karon tui eto clarity r shonge eta likhte perechish. and etar protyekta word was explosive, determined and true.

ami shudhu bolbo je ei poem tar jonyo thank you.

ar toke jodi keu etar jonno unfriend kore thake, then i have serious doubts about their sanityWacko


ki r bolbo...as a girl...ami just wrathful
eta ami at heart khub effort diye pen kore6i re

thanks r ki6u nei...ami nijei to ekjon meye

ekhono koreni keo...barang 2 jon frnd bere6e.
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krinal5chhayal

Really touching poem
Whatever you said in it is absolutely true
I just wish that women knew how powerful they were and are


fr my part...they know it,but get frightened to express it...that's the problem.
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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 1:20am | IP Logged
nice poem

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 1:27am | IP Logged
beautiful poemHeart..
just loved it..
so well writtenThumbs Up
thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
awesome yaar...touching poetry...
all lines r amazing...nice very nice...

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vrushanharshi

amazing poem 
the emotions were perfectly describe 
it was a touchy poem 
loved it 
thanx for pm 
keep writing


thank u so muchHeart
it's more a awaring poem than touchy.

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