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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 65)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditi_2010

as a poem lover i like it and appreciate your hard work but as a girl in a society like ours i love it and accept it...its high time we shud teach this people the real  meaning of being a man is not by making a helpless girl  prey to their evil dirty intentions!!! loved it!!Smile


hard work??
no dear...m really lazy.

about this poem m so much touched with Kamduni event...it's just the reslt.

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by panchaali

The whole poem touched my heart...

I will only Say "Ashadharon" Rumpu...you left me speechleess


ami eber theke thik kore6i emotion ektu kam rekhe recent event niye likhbo.
as a poet...it's my duty.
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by salooni

pious 
thought 
very well depicted 
i am with you 
go girl 
we rock 



obviously dear...WE WILL ROCK IF UNITED.
a warm hand-shake with youClap

WE OURSELVES CAN PROTECT US.

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by kiran_89

it was really heartouching and painfull...
bt i luv d way u show d willpower and strongness of girls
m proud to be a girl and on top of that a brave indian girl
nd though m up brahmin so many thinks that we worship lord vishnu but u know from my ansistors period  we worship more of maa durga


tumi Bengali brahmin?
yeah...the eternal force is maa Durga-I believe it.
sorry rumpu m nt bengali brahmin bt actually m from  eastern uttar pradesh...nd i know u r bengaliSmile

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiran_89

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by kiran_89

it was really heartouching and painfull...
bt i luv d way u show d willpower and strongness of girls
m proud to be a girl and on top of that a brave indian girl
nd though m up brahmin so many thinks that we worship lord vishnu but u know from my ansistors period  we worship more of maa durga


tumi Bengali brahmin?
yeah...the eternal force is maa Durga-I believe it.
sorry rumpu m nt bengali brahmin bt actually m from  eastern uttar pradesh...nd i know u r bengaliSmile


are what srry yaar????
I just guessed it...but the fact is not that...that's all.Smile

ohh...u know??
actually I hv habit to air it anywhereLOL

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

Dear,what to say..Again u just rocked with u'r poem..I just loved it..A perfect awakening poem and topic..I like u'r title name "Unaware of power"..And u just extracted the main issue,the problem of todays world..Rape and Victims are very serious issues and they are increasing day by day..So i just loved the way u maked such a wonderfull topic and most above,its beautifully written in u'r way..Keep it up..

Loved the begning part where u showed the amazing powers of female breed..Then u showed the comparision with a males breed..Loved the way u showed the dirty brains of a peoples behind friendship..I loved all the lines..and specially i loved last two lines of Challenging..Great work..
It was perfect POV description of female breed in the way of POEM..
Commendable..!!

Thanx for PM  

Prateek


NOW-A-DAYS girls hv to suffer from a serious anxiety regarding this issue.
we hv to think twice b4 going fr any type of work after 6.00 pm

what's that????
in what society we're living??

it's the time to protest & that too aggressively & 100% confidently. 

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
that was a powerful poem Big smileClap Clap  Clap Clap

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by prateekdave7

Dear,what to say..Again u just rocked with u'r poem..I just loved it..A perfect awakening poem and topic..I like u'r title name "Unaware of power"..And u just extracted the main issue,the problem of todays world..Rape and Victims are very serious issues and they are increasing day by day..So i just loved the way u maked such a wonderfull topic and most above,its beautifully written in u'r way..Keep it up..

Loved the begning part where u showed the amazing powers of female breed..Then u showed the comparision with a males breed..Loved the way u showed the dirty brains of a peoples behind friendship..I loved all the lines..and specially i loved last two lines of Challenging..Great work..
It was perfect POV description of female breed in the way of POEM..
Commendable..!!

Thanx for PM  

Prateek


NOW-A-DAYS girls hv to suffer from a serious anxiety regarding this issue.
we hv to think twice b4 going fr any type of work after 6.00 pm

what's that????
in what society we're living??

it's the time to protest & that too aggressively & 100% confidently. 

I agreed with each and every words of u'rs.
So thanx for making a poem on this topic...

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