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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 61)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tarakari

thank you, rumpu, yes those beasts must be reminded that in the past a woman was the one who had killed mahisha, shumbha nishumbha and other demons who were more powerfull than them. and the power that was in the woman who was called aadishakti mahamaya, lies within every woman, every girl and just needed to be awekened.


yeah...all girls hv to be aware of their internal power.

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:25am | IP Logged
nice poemClap 

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:28am | IP Logged
superb...loved it...

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Originally posted by Shashi1984

It's fabulous and emotional poem. An encouragement for women to know their power and break the hands of men who are destroying them. Thanks for this nice poem and thanks for the PM.


my main purpose is what u say...thanks a lotBig smile
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vidhi1989

tumhri poem bahut painfull to h per aurat ki strong will power b show krti h.. kash actual me b hota.. most cases me victim jeene ki hi will kho baithi hain Cryor es tarah se to bilkul b ni soch pati.. etna bada trauma hota h per jo b poem me h wo her ladki feel kr skti hai ager use ladki hone ka ehsaas hai..

anyways very nice poem..Clap


exactly dear
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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kiran_89

it was really heartouching and painfull...
bt i luv d way u show d willpower and strongness of girls
m proud to be a girl and on top of that a brave indian girl
nd though m up brahmin so many thinks that we worship lord vishnu but u know from my ansistors period  we worship more of maa durga


tumi Bengali brahmin?
yeah...the eternal force is maa Durga-I believe it.

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepa.e

so nice!!
Last lines were too good to read!!


that's the should-be mentality
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Great work ...
Loved it ...

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