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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 56)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 3:35am | IP Logged
too good !!!!!!!!
soo touching...
loved it too much

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very touching

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Beautiful

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Fantastic job on this one. Well written and it captures the feelings/emotions perfectly.

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wow. Dis was beautiful

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Yes women hv to stand up united against the atrocities against them & I'm sure God will be with us.  


Edited by crazy-nut - 06 July 2013 at 3:53am

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Originally posted by surprising

Unaware of power

 

I'm a girl,not a man;

God has made me so,

Mother Nature lulls me as so,

They find beauty in me

So give me opportunity to be fitted in every relation-

Friend,mother,wife,daughter & so on .

 

Did he commit a sin??

 

I've everything that belongs to a man

 I too have a heart having appeal

Two eyes shining with longing to know more

Two hands no less diligent than men

Two legs on tenterhooks to run

 

But the genital properties differ..

 

And that's my fault...

My appeal that offers purity & friendship,

Steals their dirty attention

They treat me just as an element to enjoy.

Their polluted hands undress me...from everything!!

 

...They snatch my virginity...

 

I'm an inseparable part of God

I give birth to civilization

I spread my wings everywhere in the universe

I've tremendous power that's devastating

I'm the source of force in heaven.

 

Then why am I so helpless??

 

The demons culture blood-seeds

They increase time to time like grass

But now,I WILL NOT RECEIVE MAN'S POWER

I will gather my own lady shoulders.

A drop of water can form vanquishing rain if united.

 

Who gives you right to dire us??

 

WE ARE CHALLENGING YOU MEN

Spread your dirty arms...WE WILL BREAK IT AT ONCE.


Wow...Amazing poem Rumpu...
Loved it..
I fell in love wid ur every poem...
They are just FABULOUS..
Thanks 4 d pm..

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