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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 51)

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
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For Immobile Galaxy
Good one, has a nice touch touche of melancholy to it :)
For friendship: loved the description


u love universe...so it's natural that u'd like itSmile

aww...thank u brotherSmile

Ha yeah thats true LOL
Ur welcome sis :)

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Awsome dear

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Beautiful poems

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
nice poem 
u really write beautiful poems nsome are so true n emotional 
i am just loving it

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
amazing poem 
frnds r n imp part of our life 
so true n frndshipis the best thing dats happens in our life
keep writing 
thanx for pm

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by TimenTIMEagain

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by TimenTIMEagain

For Immobile Galaxy
Good one, has a nice touch touche of melancholy to it :)
For friendship: loved the description


u love universe...so it's natural that u'd like itSmile

aww...thank u brotherSmile

Ha yeah thats true LOL
Ur welcome sis :)


m so happy to see u again broSmile
u search fr my reply to ur comment among so many pagesEmbarrassed
thanks a lot dear brotherHug

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Posted: 05 July 2013 at 10:58pm | IP Logged

Unaware of power

 

I'm a girl,not a man;

God has made me so,

Mother Nature lulls me as so,

They find beauty in me

So give me opportunity to be fitted in every relation-

Friend,mother,wife,daughter & so on .

 

Did he commit a sin??

 

I've everything that belongs to a man

 I too have a heart having appeal

Two eyes shining with longing to know more

Two hands no less diligent than men

Two legs on tenterhooks to run

 

But the genital properties differ..

 

And that's my fault...

My appeal that offers purity & friendship,

Steals their dirty attention

They treat me just as an element to enjoy.

Their polluted hands undress me...from everything!!

 

...They snatch my virginity...

 

I'm an inseparable part of God

I give birth to civilization

I spread my wings everywhere in the universe

I've tremendous power that's devastating

I'm the source of force in heaven.

 

Then why am I so helpless??

 

The demons culture blood-seeds

They increase time to time like grass

But now,I WILL NOT RECEIVE MAN'S POWER

I will gather my own lady shoulders.

A drop of water can form vanquishing rain if united.

 

Who gives you right to dire us??

 

WE ARE CHALLENGING YOU MEN

Spread your dirty arms...WE WILL BREAK IT AT ONCE.



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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
rumpu : lovely poem, friendship is indeed the best relation of life !Big smile

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