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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 27)

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

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Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oh !!!! Soo True Feelings !!!ClapWonderful Poem !!Clap

Shotyi, Baba, Ki Telepathy !! Bhabchhilam Likhbo, "Update Koro Na Go !", Are Ekhane Eshe Dekhi, Amar Ichhe Puron Hoyei Gechhe !!LOL



telepathy??
hmm...amr Rimi r sathe valo meleTongue
ta tor sathe o j hoi jantum naEmbarrassed


But It's True !!Wink


abiswas kor6i na reSmile

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Radhikerani

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oh !!!! Soo True Feelings !!!ClapWonderful Poem !!Clap

Shotyi, Baba, Ki Telepathy !! Bhabchhilam Likhbo, "Update Koro Na Go !", Are Ekhane Eshe Dekhi, Amar Ichhe Puron Hoyei Gechhe !!LOL



telepathy??
hmm...amr Rimi r sathe valo meleTongue
ta tor sathe o j hoi jantum naEmbarrassed


But It's True !!Wink


abiswas kor6i na reSmile


Jani To !!LOL

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

One more..!!! Thats really great..I loved it..
Loved the title name specially..Sounds beautifull "Immobile Galaxy"..
Loved the concept of two different worlds..One is like a immobile Galaxy,A worlds of dreams..
And second one is real world,seems after awakening..Then chandragupta's line was good...
Ashvathama is immortal,like a deadless person just becoz of a cursed by Lord krishna..
Very well written..

Thanx for PM

Prateek


thanks a ton broStar
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the tragic heroes snatch my all attention
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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 6:48am | IP Logged
With An Immobile
Galaxy...

God, where do you bring these thots fm???

Loved each and every word of the poem.Great.

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Beautiful ClapStar

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

With An Immobile Galaxy...

An awaiting galaxy so far...
With calm weapons in her heart
The mother path blesses with a river-full of confusion.
Do they know what's dream...what's war?


The land hued with yellow that's cute apparent
Calls for whom?
Here,beneath the azure...PEACE...
But within a moment,it'll get covered by ice-rain...
The grey world of sleepy imagination gets in touch of reality!


Blue tears of Chandragupt Mourya
Gets dirty with the touch of delightful light
Emerald of Ashvathama turns into black-hole...
Dream,life-death,war-field get mingled..
Did Karna ever notice
Unstoppable but immobile galaxy??





a beauty ever hold

the myth is retold

such an endeavour

about a galaxy so far

it is really delighting

and without a doubt interesting

here my reply wraps

will be waiting for your scraps


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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 7:49am | IP Logged
wonderful...

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
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welcome dearHug
fr such nice reply
I'll surely give reply-poemSmile

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