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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 25)

crazy-nut Goldie
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

With An Immobile Galaxy...

An awaiting galaxy so far...
With calm weapons in her heart
The mother path blesses with a river-full of confusion.
Do they know what's dream...what's war?
nice Clap

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raapunzel... Senior Member
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
sorry for d delay...

first of all a very tight hug for being so wonderful...

cngrtaz dear for second thread...

before dat...:-
     i enjoyed it a lot..how beautifully u described d breath stopping moment...the world stops for welcoming new member...how sweet...

first 18 dayd:-)
        the unseen hearts are undefined...do true dear...great
linezzz...

with an immobile galaxy..
      itz a new creation of true feelingzz...loved it...

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
Nice poem. Superbly written.

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surlin_chhabra Goldie
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Good one

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by salooni

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by salooni

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by salooni

you are rockstar 
amazing 


are dear...sarcastically?Cry

sorry i have praise 
you do i have done something wrong 
i mean 
i praise you then why this i Confused


srry dear...Cry
plzz don't misunderstand meCry
actually I believe my 1st introductionis -FRIEND
2nd is-Student
then--poet,author,debtor,speaker etc etc

above all--m a HUMAN BEING having hearty feelings

ok so want me to call you as friend only and praise in that only 
right 
am i


hmm...if u call me frnd...I'll be surely happySmile
but praising...I don't like it much

no problem 
as you comaand mam

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Awesome dr

Ik baat kahu jab Mai poems jab read krti ho to kisi or duniya Mai aa jatti yaha sirf pease hai or khushi pains vaha hai he nahi

Tht credit goes to u

Thanx dr 4 becoming dr frnd and pm me

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sritha

sorry for d delay...

first of all a very tight hug for being so wonderful...

cngrtaz dear for second thread...

before dat...:-
     i enjoyed it a lot..how beautifully u described d breath stopping moment...the world stops for welcoming new member...how sweet...

first 18 dayd:-)
        the unseen hearts are undefined...do true dear...great
linezzz...

with an immobile galaxy..
      itz a new creation of true feelingzz...loved it...



it's ok dearSmile
HugHug
it's on the celebration of mother's day

I belong to this school-leaving classCry

it's eng version of my Bengali poemTongue
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
dear salooni:

plzzz don't over-estimate meCry
let me be just your friendHug

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