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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 21)

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by prateekdave7

One more..!!! Thats really great..I loved it..
Loved the title name specially..Sounds beautifull "Immobile Galaxy"..
Loved the concept of two different worlds..One is like a immobile Galaxy,A worlds of dreams..
And second one is real world,seems after awakening..Then chandragupta's line was good...
Ashvathama is immortal,like a deadless person just becoz of a cursed by Lord krishna..
Very well written..

Thanx for PM

Prateek


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actually In-born m a mithology-hist-lover Embarrassed
the tragic heroes snatch my all attention

U'r Welcum dear
Hi 5..Same here..I am also history lover,And just a biggest fond of Mythological epics..
I read Ramayana and geeta both..


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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by prateekdave7

One more..!!! Thats really great..I loved it..
Loved the title name specially..Sounds beautifull "Immobile Galaxy"..
Loved the concept of two different worlds..One is like a immobile Galaxy,A worlds of dreams..
And second one is real world,seems after awakening..Then chandragupta's line was good...
Ashvathama is immortal,like a deadless person just becoz of a cursed by Lord krishna..
Very well written..

Thanx for PM

Prateek


thanks a ton broStar
actually In-born m a mithology-hist-lover Embarrassed
the tragic heroes snatch my all attention

U'r Welcum dear
Hi 5..Same here..I am also history lover,And just a biggest fond of Mythological epics..
I read Ramayana and geeta both..




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Geeta??? didn't till nowDead
bt Ramayana & Mahabharat is doneSmile
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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged

With an Immobile Galaxy..!!

Excellent poem...!!

Feelings are very well written..

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged
superb poem
amazing pen down of emtions
thanks alot for the pmClapClapClapClapClapClap

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 3:23am | IP Logged
wow so beautiful !!
brilliant job buddy !!!

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Wonderful! This was the first word that my heart uttered when I read your poetry. Smile
I too am a lover of poetry and have written a few. Your poems are simply amazing and I loved them all.Clap Thanks for the PM Smile

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 5:08am | IP Logged
      All Poems are good Smile So sorry haven't been able to read properly because of lack of time... Wil do when I get some time .Thanks for the PM Hug& buddy request Smile

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Posted: 01 July 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Shruti

Wonderful! This was the first word that my heart uttered when I read your poetry. Smile
I too am a lover of poetry and have written a few. Your poems are simply amazing and I loved them all.Clap Thanks for the PM Smile


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awww...u too??Tongue
will love to read ur poemSmile

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