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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 19)

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:50pm | IP Logged
dear salooni:

plzzz don't over-estimate meCry
let me be just your friendHug

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mishti_k5

Awesome dr

Ik baat kahu jab Mai poems jab read krti ho to kisi or duniya Mai aa jatti yaha sirf pease hai or khushi pains vaha hai he nahi

Tht credit goes to u

Thanx dr 4 becoming dr frnd and pm me


thanq dear buddyEmbarrassed
but our sweetest songs r those who tell our saddest thoughts
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Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oh !!!! Soo True Feelings !!!ClapWonderful Poem !!Clap

Shotyi, Baba, Ki Telepathy !! Bhabchhilam Likhbo, "Update Koro Na Go !", Are Ekhane Eshe Dekhi, Amar Ichhe Puron Hoyei Gechhe !!LOL



telepathy??
hmm...amr Rimi r sathe valo meleTongue
ta tor sathe o j hoi jantum naEmbarrassed


But It's True !!Wink

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 2:47am | IP Logged
ClapClapClapClapClapjust brilliant ClapClapClapClapClap.
nice 1.
good job.
tf pm me.

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
One more..!!! Thats really great..I loved it..
Loved the title name specially..Sounds beautifull "Immobile Galaxy"..
Loved the concept of two different worlds..One is like a immobile Galaxy,A worlds of dreams..
And second one is real world,seems after awakening..Then chandragupta's line was good...
Ashvathama is immortal,like a deadless person just becoz of a cursed by Lord krishna..
Very well written..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 5:15am | IP Logged
wow beautiful work dear !

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 5:50am | IP Logged


AMAZING WORKS,,!!
CONGRATS FOOR THE SECOND THREAD...!!! LOL

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oh !!!! Soo True Feelings !!!ClapWonderful Poem !!Clap

Shotyi, Baba, Ki Telepathy !! Bhabchhilam Likhbo, "Update Koro Na Go !", Are Ekhane Eshe Dekhi, Amar Ichhe Puron Hoyei Gechhe !!LOL



telepathy??
hmm...amr Rimi r sathe valo meleTongue
ta tor sathe o j hoi jantum naEmbarrassed


But It's True !!Wink


abiswas kor6i na reSmile

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