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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Radhikerani

RES...Pore Comment Korchhi !!

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Oshadharon, The Way You Depicted The Pain Of Caesar When Brutus Stabbed Him...The Immense Pain Of Being Betrayed By A Friend...But At The Same Time You Also Brilliantly Portrayed The Inner Faithfulness Of Brutus By This Para :-

Brutus--I've hurt myself Caesar...not you.
I've more wounds & pains than you.
But I've performed perhaps committed my duty
Even with the blood of your heart as well as mine.

The Last Line, :-


God bless you my friend, god curse me well.

Reflects The Loyalty Of A Friend Perfectly. Lovely Love It !!!! (Sorry, Aami Bangla-te Kotha Bolte Temon Kichhu Potu Noyi...Embarrassed)



Hug fr such beautiful comment



Welcome Didli !!!!

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel13

amazing one dear
thanks for sharing 

 
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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AdoriMeye

oshadharon !!!!!!!!!!
loved them


welcome re...my another Bengali readerEmbarrassed
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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged
beautiful one
god bless you my friend, god curse me well, simply superb

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by toshi_ta

Oh gosh!! Truly fantastic!! Gonna read all ur poems soon.. U r a wonderful poet..
Thnx for the pm!! *hugs*



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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by raniluvsasr

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Amzingly good. Very well written. Enjoyed it thoorughly. Awww felt bad fr caesar. U hav describeb juliues caesar soo wel. Keep writing.



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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sachindesai

choose great rhyming for poetry... which u make...
http://dealtz.com/


no thanks.
I'm quite comfortable in free verse.
don't want to change my style right now.
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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kalyani_shiva

Nice poem, Rumpu Clap.
You surprise me everytime and your username suits you StarLOL.
I have a great admirer of Shakespeare
My only doubt is, is the Julius character related to the great Julius Caesar?
And thanks for the PM Smile.


1st of all---
ROFL
o...really??Big smile

obviously...it's just a try to tribute Shakespeare.

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