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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Nice poems

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
AWESOME JOB!!!!
Really your an amzing poet!!!

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Hey My dear sister,round of applause for u...A big congrates for u'r poetic second thread.I am so glad to see, You got an amazing response.U'r thoughts and imaginations behind poems is just wonderfull.So moving on to new thread.

First poem Before That..was amazing..Lot of natural stuffs with a message of Motherhood..Loved it

And second one "The first days of 18" is really great.All the emotion and feelings of a person crossing seventeen,Is just beautifully described.Loved it.Each and every facts are amazingly added.Every youth feel like this and Missed their childhood..

Great work and keep Working
Sorry i am very late here
And yes,Thanx for PM

Prateek


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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

Hey My dear sister,round of applause for u...A big congrates for u'r poetic second thread.I am so glad to see, You got an amazing response.U'r thoughts and imaginations behind poems is just wonderful.So moving on to new thread.

First poem Before That..was amazing..Lot of natural stuffs with a message of Motherhood..Loved it

And second one "The first days of 18" is really great.All the emotion and feelings of a person crossing seventeen,Is just beautifully described.Loved it.Each and every facts are amazingly added.Every youth feel like this and Missed their childhood..

Great work and keep Working
Sorry i am very late here
And yes,Thanx for PM

Prateek


thanks a lot dear brotherSmile
yeah...me too just Shocked to see such eagerness
I feel like m blessed Star

1st poem is written on mother's day dedicated to all moms in the worldHug

yes...leaving school pains a lot in a young heart
I feel in to the boneCry
the poem is just the result.
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mishti_k5

Ur first day of 18 poem touch myo hrt  it is very close to me

Hatts off to u dr

 U r amazing tumnai words Mai Jaan daaldi

Thanx 4 pm me

Mishti


words can do everything if u can use them in a proper waySmile
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TimenTIMEagain

Congrats on the new thread..+ Well written poems


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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arnaushi

awesome poems...really loved the way u described being out of school..


I feel it in my heart dear
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rizwanaa

both poems were really awesome
heart touching
thanks a lot



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