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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 128)

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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by salooni

Originally posted by surprising

Originally posted by salooni

a long tear
of reality
and proud made a way to eyes
today
it is heart touching 
i ma with every girl 
and ready to protect my right 
just one word for poem 
today i feel proud to have vision and not blind
and have opportunity to add you as my buddyClap


thanks to the core...I feel proud of uHug

we are proud of being girl 
that why i can say
and have see this to 
other


o...really??
kaise dekhayi?? kisko??

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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Daffodelic Beauty of Something Undefined  


When a yellow bud spreads its petals
With a longing to get someone special
Offers the most affectionate relation in your world.

...Passionate love...

The marvelous colour of rainbow
Gets faded in front of a light
A light of true care,anxiety,sympathy & much more
Every drop of it lulls you,cheers you,glimmers to you.

...Paradise...

Having wound in his heart
Who offers his lap for your comfort,
Makes you feel the reality beyond your imagination,
Wipes your tears with a mind-blowing smile,
Spread a magic can make you sing.

...Hurtful love...

A lover who says-"see the light through my eyes." 
Who feels-"you are a unique jewel."
Who comforts-"I'm with you for ever."
Who forces-"come on,achieve your goal."
Who challenges-"your good qualities must defeat bad ones."
Who pleads-"remain simple...just like YOU.

...That's called friendship...

 Friendship is not how you feel
It's how you feel from the bottom of the heart
Friendship in not what you perform
It's what u perform selflessly
Friendship is what you can deny
But only when you are not in life.
Friendship is what by that you are forced...
Forced to love & to be loved.
Friendship is just a word
That perfumes your breath till death.



A friend is who he thinks himself incomplete to complete you.
& you??--you think the same. 




Haye..
Itni achi poems kiun likhti ho k parhe baghair raha nahi jaata...
Loved it to d core..
So true..

Soha!

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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sohara

Such a great message you conveyed through your poem.
Absolutely loved your thought.


my thought is capable to attract u...my pleasureSmile
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kalyani_shiva

This poem was really painful and heart-touching SmileStar.
You have each emotions with so simplicity, Hats off to you, Rumpu Clap.
You wrote a poem on such a sensitive topic, which prevails in our society.
Rapes, Female foeticide, sex-determination are done even today.
In a country where a girl, a woman is considered to be a form a Goddess, there are some people destroying it. They worship the Devi in the temple, but they do not respect the Devi in their house.

Beautiful, Ingenious.
And you are my friend, Rumpu.
Sorry for the late reply, as it raining heavily in my city.


I have to be simple in my laguage because a weak vocabulary belong to meOuch

I'm too glad that u r with me as a friendHug
it's ok dearSmile
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by raniluvsasr

Hey thnxx for d pm,
a very social poem. D words are just beautiful. Keep updating.


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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luckyarshi143

Beautiful poem...
Very well writtenClapClapClap
Thnx fr d pm...


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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prava55663

absolutely stunning...

hope people understand this soon...

me too wanting this at heart

well written dear..
thanx



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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vqwerty

Such an Awesome poem with one serious messageClapClap
Thank u for thisSmile


the most welcome u rStar

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