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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 127)

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Posted: 24 July 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by P4rveen12

Amazing and phenomenal poem, 

A very sensitive and serious topic addressed. 

Loved the poem, it was written exceptionally well.

Eagerly waiting for the next poem, 

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx



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Posted: 24 July 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gujjupari

a beautifully written & an extremely powerful poem sweetieHug

as we all know that some parents do abort a female child because of regressive attitudes... but females are no less than any males but alas some fail to understand..

beautifully written once againClap


u r most welcome dear
really...in our country,ppl awareness is too little.
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Posted: 24 July 2013 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kbtr

Amazing poetry from you, always. Sad but true. It still  happens.
tfs


obviously...& more openly.
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

With An Immobile Galaxy...

An awaiting galaxy so far...
With calm weapons in her heart
The mother path blesses with a river-full of confusion.
Do they know what's dream...what's war?


The land hued with yellow that's cute apparent
Calls for whom?
Here,beneath the azure...PEACE...
But within a moment,it'll get covered by ice-rain...
The grey world of sleepy imagination gets in touch of reality!


Blue tears of Chandragupt Mourya
Gets dirty with the touch of delightful light
Emerald of Ashvathama turns into black-hole...
Dream,life-death,war-field get mingled..
..Did Karna ever notice
Unstoppable but immobile galaxy??


WowClap
It was heart touching...Heart

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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel13

beautifully written 
thanks for sharing 


u r welcome dearSmile
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vampire-queen

Hey rumpu di!
I have neven commented in ur post! Not becoz i didn't liked it, becoz i really don't have the words to comment! Really!
Bt this poem touched my heart, and it is just awesome!

PS- i really don't knw how to reply a poem post! So sorryEmbarrassed


I know--u hit the "like" button,but never commentLOL
awww...Embarrassed...thanks dearSmile

u can quote the lines from the poem & then comment on themSmile
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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by salooni

a long tear
of reality
and proud made a way to eyes
today
it is heart touching 
i ma with every girl 
and ready to protect my right 
just one word for poem 
today i feel proud to have vision and not blind
and have opportunity to add you as my buddyClap


thanks to the core...I feel proud of uHug

we are proud of being girl 
that why i can say
and have see this to 
other

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Posted: 25 July 2013 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ranjuranjitha

Very well written!
Amazing...
Loved it...!
Thanx for the pm


thanks a lotBig smile

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