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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 125)

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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sunitikapoor

Beautiful message...
Beautifully written.
Thanks for the PM.


my main purpose is to spread the msg

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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cheesemad

awesome and beautiful poem...
with a brilliant message:)


really??
thanks
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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged

 

 
 
        
 
 
 
 
 
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 4 pming me dear...Big smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
u done a really  dear...ClapClap
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 4  ur hard work...Star
 
 
 
 
 
 
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sach a   update...Embarrassed
 
 
 
tons of ..HugHug



the  job up dear..Clap..

 

 
 
 
 
 




 
keep ing dear...Big smile




dear...Embarrassed
 
 
 
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Tama


P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
 
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...ConfusedOuch

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry
 
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics 



 

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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by foram.

such an intense poem with great message
God bless you


a big hug to u fr such a blissful blessingHug
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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskituski

After this poem I can proudly say that m a free girl n angel of my parents Clap    Smile


vry good...me tooBig smile
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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Very heart touching and sad
Good work!

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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

Its a Mindblowing, truly intense and heart wrenching poetry..Just loved the way u have showed the Beautifull message of "Embryo killing",which is spreading like a liquid in todays world..So moving on to poem,i just love the interrogation way of poem,The way u asking all the questions in red color..I just loved that..And the answers in purple color is just beautifully written,That was perfect description of female POV regarding her Embryo killing..Looks like she is asking such a questions to the world..i just loved the last two paragraph..Becoz they are really the Moral of u'r poetry..And the way u narrate whole writing is just perfect..i really appreciate u'r writing..Great work..Keep it up

Thanx for PM

Prateek


thank u  so much dear brotherHug
m just trying to create new style fr spreading sensitive but important msg
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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sumu4JayD

That was a very intense and awaring poem di.
Onek manushra etai janena k gender determination father er contribution...
mother er noy.

absolutely right re tui

Very nice!!

female foetecide is a very alarming problem and ofcor a heinuos crime.

no doubt


and to u a salute!!!
very well written

thanq

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