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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 114)

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
beautiful poem!!!
u cose an awsum topic!!!
this is seriously growing/!!!!
awsum...nyc work!!

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Lovely and yep it's one of the worst thing in lifeOuch

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by surprising

Undercurrent of Faith

 

Are you a killer??

Don't get wrathful

Every moment of everyday we kill-

Our self-respect,creative power & compassion.

 

We nurture too something...

That is...our pseudo-truth,disloyalty & musk of friendship...

We're dying everyday--

Dying every moment of life as a human being

& living as a creature that has more destructive power than good ones.

 

Can you kill your mother??

 

If yes, then at first kill the God in you

If no,then take an oath to protect her from every trouble.

 

Can you kill your sister??

 

If yes,at first kill your brotherly heart

If you are confused, you're a mobile corpse!

If no,embrace your sister just like a father.

 

Can you kill your friend??

 

If yes,then at first destroy the Faith & Love

If no...See,the yellow rose is waiting.

 

Can you kill your lover??

Don't your stings of heart air a loud protest??

 

How can you kill your wife??

At first,please sever your heart & sinews from yourself.

 

A zygote, sign of true love 

Breathing silently through the new mother,

Gaining inheritance of the new father...

...your unborn daughter...

 

If you kill it,you will kill-

You will kill all the relations made by God.

Don't forget that you,the father has given the embryo Y chromosome

So that it's going to be A BABY-GIRL...

Mother has no contribution in case of gender-determination of the embryo.

 

If you lull it,you will gain...

A bond of fatherhood-affectionate & caring.

A new friend-UNDEFINED.

A faithful bridge-between your older rose & you.

A healing medicine-to cure all pains & sufferings.

An awesome blithe-that can bring back you to your life. 

 

 ...decision lies in your hand...


Don't hace words to describe..
Just to say..."Amazingly superb"

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Hats off to you for sharing an excellent poem..Clap
The message of the poem affects my heart intensely..keep it up!!
excited for next..thanks for pm!!

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 5:07am | IP Logged
poem was beautifully written Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
beautiful & a true message


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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
superb !!...
very intense ...
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Posted: 21 July 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
superb poem
with a social message
its true killing baby girl inside a girl is crime
the persons doing so sure can't be a human
its still a serious problem
and your attempt to highlight this issue n stop it
is appreciable
ClapClapClapClapClapClap
thanks for pm

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