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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 107)

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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 6:36am | IP Logged
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Oshadharon Poems !! I Loved Each And Every Line Of Them !! Sorry, Net Problems-er Jonno Aage Comment Korte Parini ! Sorry !!!


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it's okEmbarrassed...no need to say srry


Kobe Update Korchho ?


korchhi dara...kaal/porshu

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 3:16am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oshadharon Poems !! I Loved Each And Every Line Of Them !! Sorry, Net Problems-er Jonno Aage Comment Korte Parini ! Sorry !!!


thanks reSmile
it's okEmbarrassed...no need to say srry


Kobe Update Korchho ?


korchhi dara...kaal/porshu


Okay...

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
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OMG so this is actually between CGM and Helen ? superbly writtenClap .. coz it holds true for heart-broken people across time and ages !

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
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OMG so this is actually between CGM and Helen ? superbly writtenClap .. coz it holds true for heart-broken people across time and ages !



keno 1st 2 poem e bojha jaini j convo ta asole CGM & Helen??Confused
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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Rumpu: so srry fr late reply...1st poetic corner r 2nd poem theke continue korchhi.

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
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Rumpu: so srry fr late reply...1st poetic corner r 2nd poem theke continue korchhi.


are,it's ok...waiting

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Posted: 20 July 2013 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
A Rainy Desert


...At the time of bidding adieu I can't help being fascinated by her...actually not by her...her tweets full of pain made me stand speechless...

You're leaving me...

With a suppressed yearning in your eyes
Tell me my dream-man,tell me...
How could I live without you??
Though a floral barrier separates us-
We're the constant couple with the language of silence.
You're in my heart-in my soul...
How could I sever my heart from me??


I's trying to avoid the call of heart so boldly that I replied-

I'm a futile man with a ocean of dream
I've a conservative heart like a dark chamber
My eyes are seemed to be amazing but actually dead!
I's not the right choice for you...
Don't hope against hope my nymph.
Like a mirage... I fascinated you once upon a time
...that's all...
Don't fill your eyes with precious brine
Surely some1 awaits you with colourful butterfly.


So leave a completely finished man with the confusions of life & enjoy your own life free from his shadow.



plz explain the title---desert rainy hoi ki kore??

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