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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 106)

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhikerani

Congo Didli !!!!!!

To The Gallery :-

Tu Jiye Hazaaron Saal Yeh Meri Aarzoo,
Complete Karke 100s O Pages !






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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Beautifully penned and amazing description of thoughts of a lady and a person..I know its related to previous poems..And i like the continuation with this..Its like a beautifull poetic SS..

I like the title Love making hatred..And its really true in few cases..Just loved the way u expressed the feel,emotion and a fear of a person as well as lady..The lady's POV is preety amazing and she is right..I like the statements of person most becoz its written very well..He is also right..

Now its really interesting to read further..
So great wok dear sister..
I am waiting for next Convo..
Thanx for PM

Prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 18 July 2013 at 12:14am

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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TANVI_SEXY

wow amazingThumbs Up..beautifulHeartHeart..thanks for the pmBig smile


welcome to my threadSmile
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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .Anisha.

lovely Embarrassed
keep writing more
thanks for the PM



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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LoveToLaugh

I picked up on this thread so late! Unhappy
You are definitely on your way to the third thread! Congratulations!
 
I read the first two poems and they are so beautifully written. "Unseen hearts are undefined." I told you once how much I loved this line. This is almost your signature line and why not! And I loved that tribute to your mother too. Again, I think you use imagery very well.

Btw, did you write the friendship poem yourself? The one at the beginning of this thread? If you did, kudos to you! Embarrassed
 
P.S. Will be back with my comments on the other poems soon!

1st of all,welcome yaarStar
thanq sooo muchHug

sure...I hv done itSmile
you'll find another friendship poem in this thread---I think it's better than 1st one.
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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prateekdave7

Beautifully penned and amazing description of thoughts of a lady and a person..I know its related to previous poems..And i like the continuation with this..Its like a beautifull poetic SS..

I like the title Love making hatred..And its really true in few cases..Just loved the way u expressed the feel,emotion and a fear of a person as well as lady..The lady's POV is pretty amazing and she is right..I like the statements of person most becoz its written very well..He is also right..

Now its really interesting to read further..
So great wok dear sister..
I am waiting for next Convo..
Thanx for PM

Prateek


yeah...my intelligent brotherEmbarrassed
o...really??

my pleasureBig smile

human emotion colour is really complicated...it's just a try.

ohh...will update it asap.
but nxt 1 will be a tribute poem or some other.

thanks a lot & welcome as well.Hug
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Posted: 19 July 2013 at 4:13am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by Radhikerani

Oshadharon Poems !! I Loved Each And Every Line Of Them !! Sorry, Net Problems-er Jonno Aage Comment Korte Parini ! Sorry !!!


thanks reSmile
it's okEmbarrassed...no need to say srry


Kobe Update Korchho ?

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awesome poemss

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