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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 103)

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel13

brilliant one
thanks for sharing 


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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 7:12am | IP Logged
wow amazingThumbs Up..beautifulHeartHeart..thanks for the pmBig smile

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rizwanaa

superb poem dear
the convo was really amazing
the person do has feelings for her
but doesn't want to accept them
amazingClap
thanks a lot for pm


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u r most welcome dearStar
thanq sooo muchSmile
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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Awesome Thumbs Up

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
I picked up on this thread so late! Unhappy
You are definitely on your way to the third thread! Congratulations!
 
I read the first two poems and they are so beautifully written. "Unseen hearts are undefined." I told you once how much I loved this line. This is almost your signature line and why not! And I loved that tribute to your mother too. Again, I think you use imagery very well.

Btw, did you write the friendship poem yourself? The one at the beginning of this thread? If you did, kudos to you! Embarrassed
 
P.S. Will be back with my comments on the other poems soon!

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
lovely Embarrassed
keep writing more
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 17 July 2013 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Awesome
Thanks for mp me.

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