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Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile (Page 101)

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Roxxy47

To be Honest , i don't have the 'Perfect' words to describe how this poem of your's actually is...
Seriously!! I'm Speechless Clap...

The lady just wanted to help the man she loves , go through his pain , for that she presented herself N what she got in return was his wrath , haterd Ouch...

This really was Fabulous Approve...
Again awesome choice of words Thumbs Up...
Loved it Heart.


toh...comment aur bhi long kar doTongue
she represented herself in the attire of his 1st wife...so he dislikes it.

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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sashashyam

It is perceptive, and in places, in the Lady's parts,  it sounds Shakespearan. As for the husband's reaction, that is a man all over! He will never admit that he  might be wrong, after all.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

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A Rainy Desert - PAGE 18      84152721 


Ever Lasting Adieu- PAGE 96      85372325 



yeah...just a tryEmbarrassed...try to follow Guruji

obviously...never...it's in man's bloodOuch
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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 11:53am | IP Logged
  ...Big smile  


 4 pming me...Smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 4 late comment as always...Confused



ur updates r just   n  ...ClapClapClap
 
u really done a  n  ...StarStarStar..


  4 this n keep it up sweety...Thumbs Up
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
me just .....EmbarrassedBig smile


tons of ..HugHug



the  job up dear..Clap..

 

 
 
 
 
 




 
keep ing dear...Big smile




dear...Embarrassed
 
 
 
lov,Heart
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P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
 
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...ConfusedOuch

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry
 
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics 



 


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Posted: 15 July 2013 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
beautiful poem

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
omg amaxzing poems

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 2:19am | IP Logged
rupu wondersul poem n really very true

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 2:37am | IP Logged
it really touched my heart

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Posted: 16 July 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Oshadharon Poems !! I Loved Each And Every Line Of Them !! Sorry, Net Problems-er Jonno Aage Comment Korte Parini ! Sorry !!!

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