Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 69

This content was originally posted by: Angel13

beautifully written 

thanks for sharing 

u r welcome dear😊

This content was originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Hey rumpu di!
I have neven commented in ur post! Not becoz i didn't liked it, becoz i really don't have the words to comment! Really!
Bt this poem touched my heart, and it is just awesome!

PS- i really don't knw how to reply a poem post! So sorry😳

I know--u hit the "like" button,but never comment😆
awww...😳...thanks dear😊

u can quote the lines from the poem & then comment on them😊

This content was originally posted by: surprising

thanks to the core...I feel proud of u🤗

This content was originally posted by: ranjuranjitha

Very well written!
Amazing...
Loved it...!
Thanx for the pm

thanks a lot😃

This content was originally posted by: salooni

we are proud of being girl 

that why i can say

and have see this to 

other

o...really??
kaise dekhayi?? kisko??

This content was originally posted by: surprising

Daffodelic Beauty of Something Undefined  

When a yellow bud spreads its petals
With a longing to get someone special
Offers the most affectionate relation in your world.

...Passionate love...

The marvelous colour of rainbow
Gets faded in front of a light
A light of true care,anxiety,sympathy & much more
Every drop of it lulls you,cheers you,glimmers to you.

...Paradise...

Having wound in his heart
Who offers his lap for your comfort,
Makes you feel the reality beyond your imagination,
Wipes your tears with a mind-blowing smile,
Spread a magic can make you sing.

...Hurtful love...

A lover who says-"see the light through my eyes." 
Who feels-"you are a unique jewel."
Who comforts-"I'm with you for ever."
Who forces-"come on,achieve your goal."
Who challenges-"your good qualities must defeat bad ones."
Who pleads-"remain simple...just like YOU.

...That's called friendship...

 Friendship is not how you feel
It's how you feel from the bottom of the heart
Friendship in not what you perform
It's what u perform selflessly
Friendship is what you can deny
But only when you are not in life.
Friendship is what by that you are forced...
Forced to love & to be loved.
Friendship is just a word
That perfumes your breath till death.



A friend is who he thinks himself incomplete to complete you.
& you??--you think the same. 

This content was originally posted by: sohara

Such a great message you conveyed through your poem.

Absolutely loved your thought.

my thought is capable to attract u...my pleasure😊

This content was originally posted by: kalyani_shiva

This poem was really painful and heart-touching 😊⭐️.

You have each emotions with so simplicity, Hats off to you, Rumpu 👏.

You wrote a poem on such a sensitive topic, which prevails in our society.

Rapes, Female foeticide, sex-determination are done even today.

In a country where a girl, a woman is considered to be a form a Goddess, there are some people destroying it. They worship the Devi in the temple, but they do not respect the Devi in their house.

Beautiful, Ingenious.

And you are my friend, Rumpu.

Sorry for the late reply, as it raining heavily in my city.

I have to be simple in my laguage because a weak vocabulary belong to me

I'm too glad that u r with me as a friend🤗
it's ok dear😊

This content was originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thnxx for d pm,
a very social poem. D words are just beautiful. Keep updating.

thanq so much 😳

This content was originally posted by: luckyarshi143

Beautiful poem...

Very well written👏👏👏

Thnx fr d pm...

welcome😊