Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 56

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising



thanks re😊
it's ok😳...no need to say srry



Kobe Update Korchho ?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani



Kobe Update Korchho ?



korchhi dara...kaal/porshu
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Originally posted by: surprising



korchhi dara...kaal/porshu



Okay...
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Posted: 10 years ago
rumpu : 


OMG so this is actually between CGM and Helen ? superbly written👏 .. coz it holds true for heart-broken people across time and ages !
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waiting to be unres
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Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

rumpu : 



OMG so this is actually between CGM and Helen ? superbly written👏 .. coz it holds true for heart-broken people across time and ages !




keno 1st 2 poem e bojha jaini j convo ta asole CGM & Helen??😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Rumpu: so srry fr late reply...1st poetic corner r 2nd poem theke continue korchhi.
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Originally posted by: friend-forever

Rumpu: so srry fr late reply...1st poetic corner r 2nd poem theke continue korchhi.



are,it's ok...waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
A Rainy Desert


...At the time of bidding adieu I can't help being fascinated by her...actually not by her...her tweets full of pain made me stand speechless...

You're leaving me...

With a suppressed yearning in your eyes
Tell me my dream-man,tell me...
How could I live without you??
Though a floral barrier separates us-
We're the constant couple with the language of silence.
You're in my heart-in my soul...
How could I sever my heart from me??


I's trying to avoid the call of heart so boldly that I replied-

I'm a futile man with a ocean of dream
I've a conservative heart like a dark chamber
My eyes are seemed to be amazing but actually dead!
I's not the right choice for you...
Don't hope against hope my nymph.
Like a mirage... I fascinated you once upon a time
...that's all...
Don't fill your eyes with precious brine
Surely some1 awaits you with colourful butterfly.


So leave a completely finished man with the confusions of life & enjoy your own life free from his shadow.



plz explain the title---desert rainy hoi ki kore??

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Posted: 10 years ago
FF:

desert is always dry...but the wesis is the only one which gives life even a drop or vry little bit.
similarly love is a healing medicine to all pain & suffering...so...