Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 24

Just wonderful!!!!!!! 👍🏼

love this poem, specially because u compared human emmotions wid nature's beauty.

Wow beautiful...

very beautifully written...👏👏👏

This content was originally posted by: austen4ever

Very nice😊
Every para detailed a different aspect of the greatest relationship in the world and there are so many aspects to it that you can rite reams but still touch just the tip of the iceberg.
The emotions and the flow were really nice.
What made it special was of course the theme itself!
You seem to be a prolific poet,great job👍🏼

loved ur comment from the bottom of my  heart 🤗
yeah...if i want ,i can write separate complete poems with the paras.

This content was originally posted by: crazy-nut

 

 very beautiful 👏👏👏 

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This content was originally posted by: Linsie

...Passionate love...

The marvelous colour of rainbow
Gets faded in front of a light
A light of true care,anxiety,sympathy & much more
Every drop of it lulls you,cheers you,glimmers to you. ❤️

thanks for quoting the lines😳

This content was originally posted by: jas112

congo dear

fr what??

This content was originally posted by: surprising

thanks re⭐️
true feelings age feel korte hoi babu...tar par penning. 

Sheta To Shotyi !

excellent poem...you rocks..keep rocking..👍🏼