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Posted: 10 years ago
@Fleur_de_Lis

welcome dearπŸ€—
fr such nice reply
I'll surely give reply-poem😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

With An Immobile
Galaxy...

God, where do you bring these thots fm???

Loved each and every word of the poem.Great.



thought lies in every moment,every experience,every turn of life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis





a beauty ever hold

the myth is retold

such an endeavour

about a galaxy so far

it is really delighting

and without a doubt interesting

here my reply wraps

will be waiting for your scraps




Ex-biology...a world beyond imagination
Has loads of queries in their path
A tearful weapon makes bloody war
Before that kisses an untouched forehead...

Devastating power turns into honourable creator
That snatches all the essence for ever.
But the eternal power can be destroyed never...
Even for moon-beam+sunlight's favour...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: surprising



thanks a ton bro⭐️
actually In-born m a mithology-hist-lover πŸ˜³
the tragic heroes snatch my all attention


U'r Welcum dear
Hi 5..Same here..I am also history lover,And just a biggest fond of Mythological epics..
I read Ramayana and geeta both..


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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: prateekdave7


U'r Welcum dear
Hi 5..Same here..I am also history lover,And just a biggest fond of Mythological epics..
I read Ramayana and geeta both..




hand-shake with uπŸ‘
Geeta??? didn't till now🀒
bt Ramayana & Mahabharat is done😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

With an Immobile Galaxy..!!

Excellent poem...!!

Feelings are very well written..

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb poem
amazing pen down of emtions
thanks alot for the pmπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow so beautiful !!
brilliant job buddy !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful! This was the first word that my heart uttered when I read your poetry. 😊
I too am a lover of poetry and have written a few. Your poems are simply amazing and I loved them all.πŸ‘ Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
      All Poems are good 😊 So sorry haven't been able to read properly because of lack of time... Wil do when I get some time .Thanks for the PM πŸ€—& buddy request 😊