Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile

Susmita

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi,
I'm truly astonished to see people's eagerness regarding my poems.Within a month,my 1st poetic thread got ended.I'm really really thankful to you-my dear readers.
Hope you like these poems of 2nd phase as well.

-Rumpu😊

Anchoring in a familiar heart

Friendship is not how you feel
it's how you feel from the bottom of the heart
friendship in not what you perform
it's what u perform selflessly
friendship is what you can deny
but only when you are not in life.
friendship is what by that you are forced...
forced to love & to be loved.
Friendship is just a word
that perfumes your breath till death.

INDEX
PLEASE CLICK ON THE NUMBERS GIVEN ASIDE

Before That--scroll down
The first Days of 18--scroll down

With An Immobile Galaxy...-Page 15 -86614930

Daffodelic Beauty of Something Undefined
Page 30- 86850486

Unaware of Power (salute to Matri-shakti)--Page-51 87167895

Anchoring in two closed eyes-Page 72--87437011

Love-making Hatred--Page-90-- 87792403

Undercurrent of Faith--Page 109--88307566

The Moment to Die for-Page 130--
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Susmita

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Posted: 10 years ago

1st poetic corner--- Surprising Poetic Corner: Silent Sun-quake

Poem-wise link---

INDEX
PLEASE CLICK ON THE NUMBERS GIVEN ASIDE

UNCONQUERABLE EMPEROR - PAGE 1 83976553

A Rainy Desert [ love poem]- PAGE 18 84152721

Stand In Time's Eye- PAGE 38         84512185

Evolution of something- PAGE 58           84945165

Talks Of Jupiter- PAGE 76                    85174776

Ever Lasting Adieu- PAGE 96                        85372325

With A Frozen Heart-PAGE 114

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Last Letter To Eternal Mother page-133 85986879

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Susmita

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Before That

A piece of cloud stops
A bud blooms
A bird sings
A rainbow gets back its colour
A peacock strats dancing...

Because...a creation is going on.

The cloud rains assurance
The flower fragrances perfume
The bird protects its eggs
The rainbow brightens everything
The peacock calls his love...

Because...a goddess is created.

The rain removes all tears
The flower bears fruit
The bird sees little ones mature
The rainbow shows the hidden sun
The peacock kisses his family...

Because...A WORLD BEYOND DEFINITION...MOTHER
With all her replicas is now present on our known world.

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Susmita

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Susmita

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The first Days of 18

The blooming hearts with loads of new feelings
Are now wanna to remove the border...of School!!
The rooms become old with their old graph-boards
The lawn gets boring promising so much holidays.

The half-built library & the lines before it in the sun-shine
The field with some yellowish grass
The cycle-stand without roof
The benches,chairs & fans...

Are ready to be forgotten...
Because-the new hearts are undefined.

Beyond these,the affectionate advice of teachers,
the taste of adolescence with a slight grief
1st love-letter from best-friend
the unkhown feeling to study reproductive system...

The new hearts are crying silently...
The new youths are loving carefully...their childhood!!

Because...the unseen hearts are undefined...

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congo Di !!!! Awesome Poem !! Khub Shundor Laaglo !!

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proteeti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Di, If You Can, Then Come To The CGM CC, I Sometimes Feel Like A Bhoot Out There !! Last Du-Tin Shoptaho Dhore Inactive Hoye Royechhe !!!

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Susmita

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Di, If You Can, Then Come To The CGM CC, I Sometimes Feel Like A Bhoot Out There !! Last Du-Tin Shoptaho Dhore Inactive Hoye Royechhe !!!

haha,tai naki re??
besh jabo

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