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Asya Poem-Broken Hearts

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 1:13am | IP Logged
 Guys a few lines for Asya which are broken right now by the pain and shattered i have just tried to jot down few lines on Asya...i know its super lame...but i just felt like writing few lines ..hope u guys don't get boredDisapprove

This poem is completely from my point of view hope u like itCry



PS-Edit by Perfectpix ...Thanks dearHug


Broken Hearts


Tears of blood fall from my broken heart
I never thought we would be apart

When you held me you said "forever"
Now that you're gone I know you meant "never"

Saying you love me with that look in your eye
And that was a cold hearted lie

Your tender touch, the soft forehead kiss
Two things about you I will miss

As I sit here thinking about you
My face is wet with tears past due

I should've cried a long time ago
But I loved you so

I know they say love is blind
But I had only you on my mind

A hurt so deep it cuts like a knife 
But wounds heal and I'll go on with my life...

Broken Heart

i know its super lame...still ..thanx for reading(if anyone read it)..Smile

Please let me know the mistakes..i will correct them..wrote in a flow so couldn't cross check the mistakesSmile

A GIF..by Arushi...Embarrassed


 





Edited by rakhiankita - 25 June 2013 at 1:20am

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Painful. . . Cry

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did you write the poem? cause i feel i read it once somewhere. 

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
So beautiful and painfull ! Cry

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MisHumptyDumpty

did you write the poem? cause i feel i read it once somewhere. 

sach bolun i dont know i tried to write and took help from my sis thats sit anke...and in some days ill be leaving if so just thought of writing somethingCry


Edited by rakhiankita - 25 June 2013 at 1:30am
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Omg it was awsm dear

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this is really beautiful and sad. well done anku Hug

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