Desert Hope - AsYa drabble

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Posted: 10 years ago
Desert Hope


It had been three hours and there was still no sign of her. The heat was unbearable - the air heavy, making it difficult to breathe. God alone knew how he managed to put one foot in front of the other to walk.

The desert - harsh and unforgiving, just like she had been when he had tried to explain himself. He couldn't blame her for her reaction. He had betrayed her on their wedding day. There was nothing that he could say or do that would change that one enormous truth. He hadn't slept with the bitch but how could he erase the memory from her mind. It didn't matter that he had been set up. All that did was prove his innocence. It did nothing to ease the guilt he felt for not trusting her. She had warned him...so many times, but he had been blind. How many times had he been told not to judge someone by their appearance? How many times had his stubborn, hard headed behavior proven to be his downfall and now again it had played its most cruel game.

He walked. He felt the heat through the soles of his shoe. Where was she? She had promised to hear him out hadn't she? Maybe she thought he didn't deserve that chance. Despair, helplessness and anguish began to engulf him. He...

What was that in the distance? A woman in black - seemingly lost to the world with a glint on her finger. He began to smile...maybe there was hope after all.


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A/N: on my phone so this is not proofread. Apologies! Like, criticize and leave comments! πŸ˜ƒEdited by delena90 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one! πŸ˜Š

If only Asad grew some brains and actually thought of the bitch as the bitch on the show as well!!... 

Maybe he will...
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tu hi tu tu hi tuu satrangii ree aye aye tu hi tu satrangu re! 😳 

Very nice πŸ‘
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hey priπŸ€—
you write so beautifully...πŸ‘
loved it❀️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: hsvs

Nice one!😊


If only Asad grew some brains and actually thought of the bitch as the bitch on the show as well!!...

Maybe he will...



Maybe this will be the start!

Thanks! 😊
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

tu hi tu tu hi tuu satrangii ree aye aye tu hi tu satrangu re! 😳


Very niceπŸ‘


Thanks ankie!!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: sujataraje

hey priπŸ€—

you write so beautifully...πŸ‘
loved it❀️



Hi Suja πŸ€—

Thanks love!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful :) 

This is what I'm hoping happens. He finds out.. but still has to pine for Zoya. She can't just forget that he didn't trust her all that time. And he really can't blame her for reacting the way he had many times. 
Edited by mochhug - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Del :)
This was beautiful :D
I wish it had been thoda sa r bada *greedy AsYa dil*
P.S- when are you updating fb wala   πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: giee

Del :)
This was beautiful :D
I wish it had been thoda sa r bada *greedy AsYa dil*
P.S- when are you updating fb wala   πŸ˜ƒ



Thanks giee! Drabble hai...that's why it's short.

I'll update fb wala soon!