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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 8)

damonTVDrocks Senior Member
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Awesome... Sharon taught Swayam how to deal with his emotions... A friend in need is a friend indeed!! Update soon n do pm me...

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Hey I just saw this FF! I've always admired your writing skills and this FF is another example of your writing prowessSmile I really liked the story you've started, though i find Sharon's character a little hard to relate with. Yet, I'm eager to know what happens next, since it all seems very interesting. Feel really bad for poor Swayam thoughCry Thanks for PM-ing me. And thank you Deepu di.

P.S - I havent been checking PMs off late which is why this late responseDeadI can understand what it feels to not get any feedback on something you've put your heart into.

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged
thank god my like button finally worked so i am just finish reading both ur chapter...
both the chapter are very interest and quite different...
i loved the way sharon is help swayan in bring him out from this situation...
continue soon and pm me...

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 5:44am | IP Logged

Both the updates were very nice.

I have read LTD so i know what u mean by being inspired by it.This one definitely has that same feel.The first chapter was i guess supposed to be sad,what  with Swayam being in such mind-numbing pain but it was more inspirational for me than painful

"Take the blow of it. Let it tear you down before anything can patch you up. 

Sound advice and delivered in your characteristic style- short,crisp and to the point completely lacking any exaggerated sentimental onslaught Clap


She thought he was taken ill because he did not respond when she tore at his precious hair.

"No, I'm a bouncer, had to get you out because boys inside were unsafe in your presence."

U are pricelessLOL

Chapter 2 had me feeling envious.I wish I had the clarity of thought Sharon demonstrates while dealing with Swayam's grief.Ouch

She is exactly what he needs and it looks like he knows it tooApprove

I know it looks like Swayam is the morose one while Sharon is the forever sunny one here but I have a sneaky suspicion that is not quite the truth.She is hiding something very painful behind that boisterous facade and we are going to witness a role reversal as the story progresses.Ermm

Whatever it may be,I'm sure its gonna rock and hope u don't leave it midway coz this is a story that deserves to be told and you are a writer who deserves to be read.

thanks for the pm.

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trisha19 Senior Member
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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Awesome update...Clap
waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
kankshita right?

deepu sent me your link---and i'm so glad that i followed up on it.girl, you have skills---:D

there is something so effortless about your writing...and so much of confident usage of words while portraying the story.

please do PM me next time you update---i would really love to read this.its exciting as a concept---and the execution you have done complete justice to.

love---medha

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Thank u so much for the PM. wen i mentioned in 'love bites' that i would like to read more of your works,  totally meant it. 
Coming to this FF.. it started all dark for me with the rain nd the profound sadness then loosing into the clamour. but somehow things brightened up with Sharon's entry. 
So the first chapter was more about Swayum but next was all Sharon for me. Nd let me add here that i absolutely love all your Sharon's nd this one a lil extra as of now.."easygoing and calm, completely unaffected by her surroundings"
The balance created by the brooding Swayum and cheerful Sharon is something youve got really right here. 
Thats all i have to say until Sharon returns with the Chinese:)
 


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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
res pl z remind me later

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