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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 7)

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!!
i loved just how blunt sharon is!!
swayam needs someone like her so he could face reality again...
he needs someone to push so he can understand that he is already on the ground and just needs to get up...
i'm really liking the way you built sharon's character!!
everything about her appeals to me!!
just the way she is different and refreshing!!
and finally she suceeded!!!
but swayam is still in a hurt mode...
i hope he gets his life on track soon...
and i hope sharon helps him more so he can do so!!!
Great Update!!
this is a really interesting FF!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!!!


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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
A great story and intresting plot line..
Its nice to read a story of very diff writing style..
It takes a lil long time to read.. (my weakness ) bt i loved it
would love to read more nd more..

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
i am sorry my like button is not working right now
i will try later...

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
this s d 1st tym m reading ur worksBig smile
amazing startSmile
awesomeee updatesClap
loving this sharonBig smile
waiting for d  nxt partEmbarrassed
and do pm me wen u updateSmile
and thanx for suggestin t deep diHug

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
nice one... doe continue and send the other parts...
will wait for it...Smile

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Splendid concept..
And beautiful ff ...
This is i guess a totally different concept which i will be reading for fha first time...
And m really greatful to u for this ... LOL
Umm the updates were marvelous...
i just loved the updates ..
And m super excited for the upcomming chapters...
Plz do pm me...umm the next update as well as ur writing index
And ur outstanding...
So plz continue writing ... Embarrassed Clap
With love Hug
Anandita

Edited by anandita - 28 June 2013 at 11:59pm

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 12:46am | IP Logged
I absolutely loved these two chapters. ^_^
Thanks for PM.
I am looking forward to read it.
I must say, you write flawlessly, with so much perfection.
And the concept, it is too good. It really seems like you have poured your heart in it.


I am much up for reading the rest of it. :D 

-Upasna (:

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Posted: 29 June 2013 at 1:45am | IP Logged
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First of all,i agree with u'r author's note.That was trully said.Lack of response and inspiration makes every thing down.But u and u'r work are completely different from others.I always found there is a uniqueness in u'r work and that was a great impact on readers (Specially on me).So,please keep writing..

I like that quote by jane austen

Now update was really interesting.Finally i got to know about sharon character.The way u potraits her character is just amazing..Completely different...After the death of swayam's wife,really needed to someone console him,And i just loved sharon here.She came at his place.Starting swayam waking part was nice.After that,complete SwaRon part was just awesome.Swayam is hurt and sharon helps him to overcome from that feel.feeling of loosing someone.So i hope she helps him more and he again get back his real life.Their dialouges and the conversation was great and its beautifully written.I just loved that.So i just looking forward to see their second meeting.Waiting for next part.

Please Keep writing and Thanx for PM to u and deepika..

Prateek



Edited by prateekdave7 - 29 June 2013 at 9:53am

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