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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 6)

zk456789 Goldie
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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
Read the chapter really nice one
Thnx for the pm
Do update soon

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Nice

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
this story has got a nice ring to it..
the way u have created the storyline and penned it its absolutely brilliant..
while reading this i felt at ease as the story went nice and easy with a flow which allowed me to immerse in it even more...
your protagonists are simple yet i feel there is a certain mystery to them ...
loved it
thanks for the pm deepu di
do pm me when u update next kanks(hope u wouldn't mind me calling u that)

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
I love it... A different Sharon and a different Swayam ... I am really loving it... you are one amazing writer... Do update soon :) :) 

PS: Pm me too :D 

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
as always I just loved the way you wrote it..
the way you expressed the emotions was just fantastic... Clap
Both characters are totally different here... and are quite interesting..
the way you wrote the dialouges I just loved it.. it was just so casual so realistic and so uniqe.. It was just amazing..
loving the story so far plz do not disscontinue it..
waiting to read futher..
and thank u for the PM Big smile

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
Wow another awesome chapter..Smile
I am really liking the portrayal of sharon here...
an independent and completely optimistic girl...Smile
waiting eagerly for the coming chapters.

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
I just love the way you write! Awesome story so far and very interesting too. I love sharon's optimistic character Clap. Please continue soon and pm me when you update.

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Posted: 28 June 2013 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
Hey...
Just came to know about this amazing work.. Aftr a pm from deepika...
I had just reAd your 1 or 2 posts on d3forum... I have even replied i think... But i am not sure...
Your style of writing is amazing... And the concept is very different...
And i seriously loved sharon here... I do have a feeling that she might be in love with swayam since college... But i am not sure...
And i loved both the chappy's but second chap. I found that quite amusing...i have never seen a writer who can express grief in a comic sense... So for that you deserve an applause...
Do continue soon.

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