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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 57)

maliha_khan Senior Member
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Posted: 09 February 2014 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Brilliant ff... I loved the way u portrayed swayam's character n true tat one cannot fall out of love... Sharon characterization in humorous way us fab... 

Thanks deepika for suggesting me this superb ff...

P.S. Chap 16 was the last chap? Or is there anymore chaps of this ff???

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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Unreserved

Oh Man.!Finally i am here,actually i just lost my flow as a reader,due to crappy schedule of working life..The last update was tremendous,I was reading Sharon part again and again and i felt so so interesting to read her and more above,i just loved the way u potrayed her character and described her in such a cool way..Well as usual convo part was amazing,i like SwaRon convo..And specially i just loved ur way to write dialouge delivery. in ur updates,This one contain all the flavours of fun,love,romance and emotions..I only say,Brilliant dose of writing..Loved it..

Thanx for the PM
And hearlty sorry for this late.


Prateek


Edited by prateek.007 - 19 April 2014 at 5:59am
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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
this chapter was good... rey have let down his propose to sharon and like both of their
bond of being friends... and sharon told the truth to swayan what they both are above to
do... do continue soon and pm me

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
There's something about this story, I will let you know what if and when I put my finger on it, that just fills a void somewhere within me. I understand that ideas don't grow freely off trees and sustaining one takes time and effort, so I won't hold it against you if you take impossibly long to update, as long as it's something that you are genuinely satisfied with.

Also OUCH. For killing Swayam's wife. And OUCCHH. For the whole unrequited love scenario. 
I am not entirely sure where the plot's headed, which is a good thing I suppose. Rest asured I am definitely on board whereever the express is headed. 

And just so we are clear, despite the figurative bruising, I love your work xD

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Posted: 18 April 2014 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Please update

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Edited my comment on previous page..

And yeah do update soon as ur comfort


Prateek

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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Hey i was not on IF but i have read this FF and its beautiful...Swayam and Sharin dont need to be SwaRon in ur write up to be enjoyable...coz they are so effective as Swayam and Sharon only...Especially Sharom her approach towards life is something i love...i even love reyaansh in this ff...rey sharon convo u relly put it very well there...you are not mushy n i love that about you...plz update this ff its been long...atleast for those ppl who read it Smile

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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 6:36am | IP Logged
I will resume writing in a couple of weeks since that is when my summer break begins. Also, I will try to end the story this time. Embarrassed

Thank you.

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