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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 55)

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
There's something about this story, I will let you know what if and when I put my finger on it, that just fills a void somewhere within me. I understand that ideas don't grow freely off trees and sustaining one takes time and effort, so I won't hold it against you if you take impossibly long to update, as long as it's something that you are genuinely satisfied with.

Also OUCH. For killing Swayam's wife. And OUCCHH. For the whole unrequited love scenario. 
I am not entirely sure where the plot's headed, which is a good thing I suppose. Rest asured I am definitely on board whereever the express is headed. 

And just so we are clear, despite the figurative bruising, I love your work xD

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Posted: 19 April 2014 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Edited my comment on previous page..

And yeah do update soon as ur comfort


Prateek

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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Hey i was not on IF but i have read this FF and its beautiful...Swayam and Sharin dont need to be SwaRon in ur write up to be enjoyable...coz they are so effective as Swayam and Sharon only...Especially Sharom her approach towards life is something i love...i even love reyaansh in this ff...rey sharon convo u relly put it very well there...you are not mushy n i love that about you...plz update this ff its been long...atleast for those ppl who read it Smile

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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 6:36am | IP Logged
I will resume writing in a couple of weeks since that is when my summer break begins. Also, I will try to end the story this time. Embarrassed

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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by epiphany.

I will resume writing in a couple of weeks since that is when my summer break begins. Also, I will try to end the story this time.Embarrassed

Thank you.


Actually I don't want this story to end soon
want swaron hot moments coz sharon is sexy n swayam is kind of reserve person want hot n sexy scenes between them Wink
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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by epiphany.

I will resume writing in a couple of weeks since that is when my summer break begins. Also, I will try to end the story this time.Embarrassed

Thank you.

What???No!!!i am happy rhat you ginna resume writing n trust me i love this ff...i dont want it to end this soon..i hope by end u mean by updating reguralry u gonna end it...ah!waiting to get floored by ur writing agai Smile

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Posted: 10 May 2014 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Of course I'll update regularly and then end. Like, I think, 10 more chapters.

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Posted: 24 May 2014 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Hey.
Do you remember me?

Anyways. I read this story after ages, and I still love it. I like the twist you added about Rey and Sharon sudden friendship. 

The talk between Swayam and Sharon was great. I love their sarcasm, rather your sarcasm. It's so way better than the cheesy lines they are using in the show. It's makes me feel sick and want to thrash the poor television.

I hope you plan to continue this soon. 

Love,
Niv

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