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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 54)

zk456789 Goldie

Joined: 16 February 2013
Posts: 1397

Posted: 16 November 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Ok coming directly to the update that was mind blowing
I love the way you penned Down swayam character in your work
And I love Sharon bold nature love the way how swayam is going to sacrifice his love for rey n Sharon
Now waiting for what happens next
I think this is just rey n Sharon plan for swayam to accept his love for Sharon
Lovely update as usual
Do update soon please
The update was after like 2 month

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damonTVDrocks Senior Member

Joined: 06 April 2013
Posts: 509

Posted: 16 November 2013 at 2:54am | IP Logged
  At last you updated, K! It was awesome, with the new shooting twist, and Swayam accepting his love for Sharon. I dun feel like commenting long, so I won't.LOL
 Just update soon. Will comment properly next time.Tongue

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austen_TanHa IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 February 2013
Posts: 19343

Posted: 16 November 2013 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
finally!! and this is my res

let me start by congratulating you for successfully penning this chapter.
the conversation between the brothers was enlightening. it gave an insight into both their psyches. though considering how nonchalant Rey pretended to be about Sharon, it was shocking to learn about his proposal. i hope Sharon isn't reading too much into what was meant as a joke. her reasons for considering his proposal left me feeling really sad for her. none of them have anything to do with her happiness and it somehow felt defeatist. like she's given up on ever having her love reciprocated and is settling for the next best thing.
so swayam finally realized he loves sharon. it literally took him a shootout and a proposal to figure this outLOL
my fav part was the last line coz this really is in every sense the beginning. what's left to see is whether it is the beginning of two very obviously broken hearts healing each other or of them finally smashing into irrepairable 'smithreens'

Edited by austen4ever - 16 November 2013 at 1:07pm

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paro1311 Senior Member

Joined: 17 September 2012
Posts: 704

Posted: 16 November 2013 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
If u took this long for an update so well thought out and somewat unpredictable, im glad i waited this long. Sharon has been my fav throughout the story but at this point im enjoying swayum a bit more. I absolutely love the way the story is moving and the way the charatecrs are developed. Ur really good at gettin some really complex emotions out perfectly on paper. As swayam says.."it has begun"
nd im waiting to see wer it goes from here. :)

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ToujoursPur IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 January 2012
Posts: 4201

Posted: 16 November 2013 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
dunno what to say kanks.
just too good.
it has begun huh?

lets see what happens next. cant wait.

and honey, you write awesomely brilliantly well. just frigging smartly.

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reflections. Goldie

Joined: 27 October 2012
Posts: 1659

Posted: 17 November 2013 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Woman, I loved this chapter. The way you have expressed all the emotions, specially the pain felt by Swayam is commendable. Loved it to the core. The characters, now, are shining out and they've come out to have very strong ideas and opinions but of course none, losing their maturity. 
Well done, Kanks. Approve 

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Myra. Goldie

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Posted: 19 November 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Kankshita! could even get more amazing dude!! this might be the best chapter indeed...Rey n sharon?? god quiet interesting and swayam mann i feel damn sorry for him! kk looking forward 2 da next chapter.. so give in soon!! :D

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prateek.007 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 06 February 2012
Posts: 8238

Posted: 27 November 2013 at 1:10pm | IP Logged

Finally i am here to read ur update..Now a days due to inactiveness,its very difficult to resume with reading..But yeah Ur FF is really interesting..So moving on to update..I just loved it..It was amazing..Firstly the brother convo was good to shown swayam emotional potrayel..Amazingly penned...He is insecure in respect to his love for sharon..and i really like insecure swayam here..Finally He is in love with sharon..But i also like  rey bro as a catalyst between SwaRon..After then sharon's club scene was awesome to shown us concerned swayam..I like reading specially in this part..Loved the worriedness of swayam..Well sharon was also amazing..But it was really shoking to read rey proposal for sharon..But anyways..Now i am glad that Swayam realized his love for sharon...So i am waiting for next part to read further moves of SwaRon and their love..

Thanx for PM
And do update as soon as ur comfort


Edited by prateek.007 - 06 December 2013 at 1:13pm

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