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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 51)

Autumn_Hue IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
You updated after such a long time it was totally worth the wait..Smile.
Sharon ka accident ho gaya I liked seeing the frantic swayam though..
Reyaansh has started developing a soft corner for sharon is aware of this new development in reyaansh's heart.. Staying with sharon in the hospital looking after her and making his moves on her and sharon smartly dodging his moves on her by only reciprocating friendship for his feelings..Big smile.
I liked the heart to heart talk sharon and swayam had about her father seeing a prospective groom in every man he meets of sharon's age.. And clearing out all the matters regarding reyaansh and swayam's guilt..Heart
Well written kudos to you gal update the next part soon and thank you for the pm..Thumbs Up
P.S- I loved the quote in the beginning of the update it was beautiful..Embarrassed.

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damonTVDrocks Senior Member
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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
So, you started writing again! It's a good thing, know? It was a pleasant surprise finding your update related pm in my inbox!!LOL I really missed this FF to the core.
 Coming to the update, it was as always awesome...Clap You always amuse me with your writing..
 Sharon hospitalized! Rey hitting on her!!LOL Sharon's father was hilarious..LOL All this, combined with your writing, is a the most amazing combo it can get! Loved SwaRon talk..Tongue
 Yes, I can say, the story is moving forward..Smile
 
 I expect to get a sooner update this time...Wink It'd be even better if it's biweekly as you have said...Big smile

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Myra. Goldie
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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
I love Rey & Sharon's bond man they are so cool.. still I don't get the point at the beginning why did you say sharon was jealous again? Well written chapter.. umm.. I guess I was beginning to miss the updates..

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AninditaSwaRon Senior Member
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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged
I finally read all the chapters :) :)
Aiaa laga i wasn't reading it I was seeing
every single scene in front of my eyes.
That is a great quality of a writer

I am liking sharon's character the most.
I am more of a swayam fan when it comes to the serial
but I am simply head over heels with this sharon.
Beauty Humour independent modern combination
of everything.

Although swayam's character is no less. Beautiful
in it's own way.

Till now the story is going great. I wanna know
What Next is in store for us?
One can never fall out of love. I wanna know how
Swayam will fall for sharon.

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vrushanharshi Goldie
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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 10:54am | IP Logged

 

awesome update 

loved it n btw after soo long u updated but was super awesome 

i was hooked to it frm start to end 

n the best was sharon for me in the whole update 

loved her character n the swaron convo in the ending was also the best 

in short the entire update was awesome as we had to wait a lot  for reading it 

but plz update the next chp soon 

will be waiting for it

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sweetydiyafrien IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 8:31am | IP Logged
that was great and good well written chapter...
after park the car and sharon when to accident and hospital...
and swayan as a friend take care of her and told his brother to look after he left
to take his sharon dad... wow hid dad talk to both of them...
and now is after it for serious note... it get interest to read more...
do continue soon and pm me

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ProngsPadsMoony IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
beautiful update 
you really got me  hooked up to the end

loved sharon in the update and the swaron talks 

cont soon

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 5:58am | IP Logged
apologies for being late...
amazing update as usual... though i enjoyed your sharey the most !
it was fascinating to imagine rey flirting and trying hard for sharon !

i appreciate sharon's sense of rejecting someone trying this hard for her ... and ofcourse her sense of humor has always kept me glued... and interested...

all in all i loved it completely... ty for the pm and do continue soon !

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