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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 45)

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Posted: 11 August 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Chapter 12 - Loved the open conversation between the two. It's like there is nothing that these two have to hide from each other. As always, your write ups always have a very humorous edge to them and I really like that. It was a very nice read. Beautifully described, especially Swayam thinking about Rhea.


Chapter 13 - Hilarious chapter, I don't know why I found it very funny. The entire scene where Sharon was conversing with 3 people at the same time on different subjects was humorous. Also, Sharon acknowledging the fact that she loves Swayam was great. I liked the chapter a lot. Thanks for the PM


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Posted: 12 August 2013 at 1:02am | IP Logged
sharon and swayam back to being the best buddies..
really loving sharon more n more with each update..Embarrassed
eagerly waitg for nxt update..

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Posted: 13 August 2013 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Hey Kanks, plzzz update... It's been long time since you last updated...Confused

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
awesome..!!
srry i am late..
but i hope mujhe maafi mil jayegi...LOL
amazing chappy...
urri baba...bechari sharon...
ye solemn family toh isse maar hi dalegi...!
bechari zindigi bhar kuwari rehne vali h kya..???Wink

hahah...!!! 
lovely update...!!

love,
anny

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 8:39pm | IP Logged
I want update! Stern Smile

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 3:31am | IP Logged
                                                        Chapter-12

Sorry for my previous short comment..Now i am moving with chapter,Actually it was emotional chapter for me..The way u described whole scene,was beautifull..All the potrayel of emotions was amazingly described..i loved that..Its really great finally swayam and sharon both started to work things out regarding current situation..Loved their friendly conversation..very well written..Swayam's compliment to sharon as a Hott..really amazing..i liked the dialouges most...So it was awesome part as usual..
And yes,Nice Quotation above in the chapter..

Thanx for PM

Prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 23 August 2013 at 2:08am

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 5:25am | IP Logged
                                                         Chapter-13

Great update..Truly,loved the sharon in this update..Again u wrote such a mindblowing conversation..Loved each and every dialouges..Swayam was also perfect in this scene..Sharon forgive him and they are again friends now..I think the update was funny too..I enjoyed shekawats convo's with sharon..So in whole,it was enjoyable update..Keep it up..I am just looking forward to read such conversations again..Great work

Thanx for PM
And sorry for late comment,I know u never mind..LOL

Prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 23 August 2013 at 2:36am

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