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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 43)

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 1:32pm | IP Logged
Ausum update.. Loved it.. Emotions were beautifully penned down...

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kamlesh32 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Great update! Loved how swaron are becoming true best friends...
Please update soon...

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
I am literally taking my time out to comment on your FF as it is just not possible for to NOT comment. Blame my schedule or something for short comments, sorry! Stern Smile

I really liked the enitre scenarios you putted down in the chapter, it was in flow, loved that. Small parts and scene you wrote, just made this entire chapter a very sensible and interest catching one. Approve

That 'ridiculous husband and bombshell part was like freaking hilarious. I was drinking water and when i read that bombshell dialogue, i chocked. It was very +ve you know that when there is a grief and pain and darkness scattered in this story then there is also lightening modes and small funny parts where you don't feel like 'When can i actually smile in this story!' and this the best part of this chapter, i loved it. Hug

You know back to back, giving such sort of nice chapters are only increasing readers hope from you and this FF, and i know you won't let us down. I am so in love with this chapter, actually i figured it out that i say it almost for every chapter's comment! Embarrassed Call it your writing charm but i am loving this wonderful fan fiction of yours. Hug

Please update soon, i can't wait to read further.


Marium.

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anushka1129 Senior Member
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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 1:59am | IP Logged
sorry am late :(
wow awesome update once againClap..
you know what am loving this sharon more n more..
she is such a awesome person..she just tell whats in her mind..
never tried to hide the feeling she has for swayam.
n aww swayamHeart
he don't want to loose sharon n her friendship..
he consider her bbf..
swaron convoThumbs Up
just loved it..
plz update soon..
n thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Srry 4 being late ...
But it was an awesome update...
I loved sharon..
And swayam ...well i don know just can't hate him...
Ur amazing yaar...
Its supalyk...

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prakriti4u Senior Member
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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
rocking update as usual..
and ur writting skill is bang on as always!!

I love the way u keep things non complicated.. and straight forward..
loved it..
excited to read next one..
thanks for the PM Big smile

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VickyLover Newbie
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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
LOVED the chapter...very well written and sharon really is an unpredictable person...she doesnt show her vulnerable side and i love the way swayan cares bout sharon nw and is bwing thoughtful...
bt i wna see more of swaron as in love...
thnxx fr the pm...
do pm me bout the future updates too...
amazing work Clap

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
sharon's not the only eccentric one here.is she!
glad to see the friendship return.their honesty was refreshing.it felt cathartic to see sharon being so open about her feelings and swayam dealing with it so maturely.thank heavens his streak of insanity left him at the graveyard.
the ending was beautiful and my fav part of the update.he knows what he needs and more importantly is alert enough to know what she needs.
at the risk of sounding like a broken record,i'm going to say you are a brilliant writer.

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