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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 41)

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
Whoa super update gal..Thumbs Up Embarrassed . Loved the lines that you quoted before the update but then I loved them in every chapter they're simply awesome yaa..Heart.
Swayam and sharon finally coming to terms with the situation and are trying to work things out great..
Loved the part where he adresses sharon as hot hehe.. Wink.. They consider each other as best friends atleast swayam does now that's taking a step ahead..
Lovely update kankshita ur an awesome writer..Hug
Thanx for the pm and update the next part soon..Smile

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
# Chapter 2
Jane Austen's quote at the top is pretty much realistic. You cannot love your friends in halves.
This chapter provided a further insight into the story. Swayum's grief is evident throughout the plot. Sharon's pragmatic clarity seems quite impressive. You justified the title very well by rightly saying that one cannot resort to his usual self without smashing down to smithereens.
The story holds an inherent charm in itself. I wonder what's the relevance of Chinese food over-here. I'll go read the third part and find out asap.

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
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this was brilliantClapClap

from d starting till d end it was perfectClapClap

loovveedd itttSmile

swayam calling sharon hotttEmbarrassed

and m luving this sharonSmile

continue soonSmile


Edited by aishu3003 - 02 August 2013 at 5:15am
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#Chapter 3

This chapter was vivacious and blissful. You're unpredictable as you made your readers await for Chinese while you ended up serving a sunshine. LOL
The humor quotient spranged up in this part. Sharon's wit amazes me. Her passion about driving and her bonding with the car brings amusement. Swayum is smiling through tears. He is getting back on track slowly yet subtly. Sharon provides him with exactly what he wants. Her goodwill and optimism eventually rubs on him.
I'm keen to know the futher developments into the story. Brilliant stuff Kankshita.

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Posted: 26 July 2013 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 12:18am | IP Logged
#Chapter 4

That's why I was perplexed when you chose Science and satisfied when you shifted to Humanities. You're mean to be a writer Kanks. Embarrassed
As you mentioned, the fourth chapter is longer and heavier. Swayum's work keeps him busy. But, he still mourns Rhea's loss. These lines depict his frame of mind perfectly.

Salvation and recovery weren't coming, only order to a man's life which had been formerly smashed to smithereens.

He doesn't need sympathy but his search for a supportive companion takes him to Sharon. These lines are wonderfully written:-

He was quite grateful to her for exhibiting without an ounce of sympathy, sheer will to chaperone. It wasn't sympathy he yearned, he detested it. He was denied any support though, the one thing both his late wife and his conscience knew he'd need, as had both feared he wouldn't get any.

Their visit to the graveyard was gloomy yet gracious. Gracious because Swayum had accepted the loss calmly. Anyone who dies fighting with cancer or even experiences the disease becomes essentially headstrong. It's good to know that he respects her wife's valiance. The dialogue between Swayum and Sharon has been majestically written. 
The concluding lines left an indelible imprint upon my mind.  Scars are truly the reminders of pain and not the sources.
Thanks for this beautiful piece of work.

-Nikita Hug



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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 3:20am | IP Logged
both are get to know each other that well... i really like it...
read more... do continue soon and pm me...

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Posted: 27 July 2013 at 4:17am | IP Logged
wow...

the conversation was simply wow.. and it made so much sense i could imagine every bit of it ! nothing typical and that's exactly what love about this swayam and sharon! 

i enjoyed the little game they played... it was funny!
pls continue soon and yea ty for the pm!

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