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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:24am | IP Logged
nice start... i have always loved your style.. please do continue as and when you have time.. 

cheers!!
~jiya~

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Whoa!!!
that is defnietly a different concept!!!
and you wrote i amazingly!!!
like it had such a dark feel to it..
and i could everything that you wrote!!!
poor swayam he is going through so much but he doesn't express anything!!
and sharon blunt character totally caught me off guard!!
but i love the way she is!!
a great start!!!
CONTINUE SOON!!! 

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Posted: 25 June 2013 at 11:33am | IP Logged
whoa... and i loved it !

pls continue soon and ty for the pm !

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 12:24am | IP Logged
very different 
lovely ff
chp 1 was very nice 
waiting for the next update 
thanx for pm

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 1:24am | IP Logged

Well.

 

I know a simple sorry won't cut it, so I'll just say it rather quickly ('Sorry') and attempt to appease you with a good enough comment.

 

First things first, you have no idea how much the dedication means to me. I don't deserve it, there is no denying that but it pleasures me all the same that such a talented writer like you would even think about deriving any sort of inspiration from my work. I...just...Thank you.

 

Ahem, moving on to the story. I did tell you before that I had lost all interest in SwaRon and reading anything about them just didn't appeal to me anymore. That still holds true. But the thing is, somehow, I didn't think of them once while I was reading the chapter. And I think that says it all. I'd rather not associate any SwaRon-y feel with any of your works. Your works are way too brilliant.

 

Somehow, I don't find this story dark. I've read some of your darker works and this isn't one of them. Sure, there is death and pain but somehow the solidarity between your two main protagonists eclipses all of that. There is something very hopeful about the way they interact. It tells you that friendship transcends all inhibitions. It does not succumb to the powers of Time. It has a stand of its own.

 

Your stories flow.  There is no abruptness in them which is a very fine quality.  The details are sharp and humour is prominent throughout the chapter. It's light and well-crafted.

 

Well.

 

I can't promise to be regular though I promise to try.

 

And I can't convey just how much I love you for being my friend. And my inspiration. You're a stud, lil Lady. Truly. Hug

Love,

En.



Edited by Sawyer_Tom - 28 June 2013 at 9:11am

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 6:19am | IP Logged
great start...
loved the first chapter..
looking forward to read further...
thank u for the PM Big smile

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Posted: 26 June 2013 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Awesome start swayam full on depression me n Sharon owns a bar lovely update
Thnx for the pm
Do update soon

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Posted: 27 June 2013 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Wow, girl.

You actually wrote something? I am surprised and shocked.

And you know what shocks me even more? The Sharon here, up till now, I'd rather say, has been utterly different than the usual Sharon-s you come up with, and yes, the shock is in an amazingly positive way, if that even makes sense. LOL

So, "DarkandTwisty" it does seem to me, the Swayam I mean. And of course he would be, his wife died. 

Okay, I am up for this, so you ought to continue sooner, given, you already wrote frigging five chapters, and again! I am shocked.

Continue soon :')

Love.
-N

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