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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 29)

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Swayam and Simmi are a blast!LOL
She thought he was being a roasted chicken the wrong wayROFL
That was one hilarious dream!
Finally found something common between your Sharon and the show's Sharon (the one that used to be),they both hide their hurt.Yours does it under boisterous cheeriness while the latter used straight-up denial.I like yours betterApprove
I found this chapter more significant in terms of Swayam and Sharon being together than the one you mentioned thoughConfused
If I haven't said it before,you are a fabulous writerClap

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 5:00am | IP Logged
The updates were beautifully written.. loving the way you are building the story n describing the situations.. Im in love with dis swaron.. waitg for nxt update

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
loved the 6th chp
sharon n swayamEmbarrassed
someones falling in loveHeartHeartHeart
this is getting more interesting n i am loving it 
thanx for d pm 
update soon

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
                                                            Unreserved

                                                            Chapter-8

Its awesome and enjoyable update..Loved the all conversations part of SwaRon and simmi..In begining college reunion part was beautifully described..I really liked the bond of simmi and swayam..and their fight was sweet..Sharon dreaming about swayam as a roasted chicken..!! quite amusing fact..Now i liked swayam to came there at her place and said it all..Courageous man..So i am just waiting for next part..The story is becoming more and more interesting day by day and update by update..So do update as fast as possible...

Thanx for PM

Prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 09 July 2013 at 9:50am

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged
awesome updates 
dont know how  to describe but enjoyed reading both the chp 7 n 8
loved it a lot 
i am loving the way u r writing
this is becoming more interesting n incresing my eagerness to read further
thanx for d pm 
update soon...
[one day one updateThumbs Up]

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Please update 2 days se koi update nai mila he
Pretty please

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
FTW!?!?! Shocked

You reached chapter eight?!

Man, you're really going out  of your way to make me feel guilty. And as much as I would love to ignore the rest of my world and sit and read this marvelous compilation of yours, I'm going to have to wrench myself from  this and make yet another promise. I solemnly swear that I'll read and comment by this weekend. No matter what. 

 That being said, I still don't think I should reserve a post for it. I'll come back and make one. 

Love,
An apologetic En. Blushing

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Posted: 10 July 2013 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Sorry for the late reply!!!!
Awesome update!!!
im glad that swayam is slowly becoming normal!!
and his and simmi's fight was hilarious!!
fighting over him messing up his clothes!!
and im suprised sharon was n't angry that swayam woke her up at 3 in the morning!!
and the dream was absolutely hilarious!!
i can't even imagine swayam as a roasted chicken!!!
love your writing style!!
CONTINUE SOON!!!1

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