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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 28)

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Chapter 7

Can i say i liked the chapter as much as i liked the previous one?TongueSimmi's description was nice, as was the way you showed the strong bond between Sharon and her. I found some bits really "cute" in this update like when Sharon is observing Swayam while driving.Another one was when she was talking to herself in front of her car about her feelings for SwayamEmbarrassedYou showed Sharon's soft side. She actually cried and I really liked how you showed that despite everything, she is sort of a softie.  I L-O-V-E-D the bonding session between Sharon and Swayam in the end. It reminded me of MJ and Harry's fun in the kitchen scene in Spiderman 3LOLDon't ask me why.TongueI just did. Great update.

*Runs off to read Chapter 8*

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Chapter 8 -

Nice chapter. The description of the reunion was nice written. I felt that Simmi and Swayam were arguing like husband and wife. Wife and husband ratherLOLI liked the SwaRon conversation about Swayam. The sitting under the trees thingy was actually quite cute.The way Sharon tried to lighten the mood was sweetEmbarrassedRoast chicken? O.o

*Runs offline*Tongue

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
really loved this chapter ..
loved swayan n simmi arugement..
what's next??really wanted to know so update soon ;)
thanks for the pm:)

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
Amusing Chapter.
Swayam roasted chicken LOL sharon is going nuts!
Simmi n swayam's argument was so cute. Adorable bond!
I just want to read the next part real bad. Its getting so amazing day by day mahn!
Sharon stayed cool even though she was hurt inside nd swayam so cutely came nd said it all out to sharon. Cuteness at its peak!

Amusing Update!
Waiting for the next.

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Posted: 08 July 2013 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Edited on page : 26

I will edit chapter eight's comment in a day for sure.

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Posted: 09 July 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
LOL roasted chickenLOLand gay car ROFL gosh i love ur updates too much...
sorry i wasnt able to comment after i once commented on chapter 4 coz i never  realised that u were updating everydayPinch anyways i just now read the left out updates and they r all too gud...love this ff...


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Read all the chapters in one go...
Really entertaining read...
Waiting 4 the next...

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Edited on page 24. Sorry Im late!

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