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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 25)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Ah, i loved this one! Well obviously because sharon's point of view is so Embarrassed 
And its turning Blushing update by update LOL
Swayam poor soul, his car will run away one day on its own. Sharon was busy staring at him in the car too! Woosh.
Simmi n Sharon's bond! Big smile I adore them very much.
Then the food talking, sharon is loosing her heart but at the same time she is understanding swayam's state too. Then the hug it was comforting, short but impactful.

And Here I am again, too excited for the next one! Geek
Keep it going Thumbs Up
Well, i really loved the update! Approve

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chapter 2
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There is nothing I would not do for those who are really my friends. I have no notion of loving people by halves, it is not my nature."  - Jane Austen

 

there wasn't a better way to start the chapter! Clap

So,sharon is somehow swayum's medicine Embarrassed a messiah,he simply just needed.

I admire sharon for some reason. She is this "i dont give a damn about the goddamn world.I do what i want,without being afraid of being judged" kinda girl.

Such people are rare to find!and should not allowed to leave!Becuase no matter what,they may seem cold towards the world,but actually,in comparison with the diplomatic kind,these people turn out to be better human beings.

i love how she was calm and composed the whole time,as she helped swayum come to terms with the fact that it alright to be grieve over his lost wife.

Swayum,what do i say about this guy?Somehow,he is more mysterious than he seems.I wanna know more,you know.Its as if,okay he has these a,b,c characteristics,but x,y,z are hidden somewhere deep within.

i love it when a character has depth like this. <3

So sharon has made up her mind to eat chinese eh?poor swayum LOL

beautifully written Kanks! Clap





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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
totally loved it ..well writtenThumbs Up
simmi n sharon bond is amazingSmile
sharon is staring at swayam in car aww..
poor swayam gay car haha..
sharon is so in love with swayam but she also know that he loves his late wife..
aww swaron hug..
whats next eagerly waiting
thanks for the pmSmile
update soon..

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
that was just awesome means sharon has a like for swayan...
and i think simmi knows about this... there is reunite party at the college...
continue soon and pm me...

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Lovely chapter...i especially loved the way you wrote the last couple of sentences Clap. They show that sharon is truly in love with swayam and deeply cares for him! I just hope she confesses soon...
Please update soon

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Edited on pg : 20

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Posted: 07 July 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
R e s e r v e d.

For chapter # 7

Edited.


First question first! Are a magic woman or a fairy God mother or something? Stern Smile No, on serious note you are something er,... unique! Stern Smile I mean you are making me shocked and happy with each passing chapter. I knew you do write amazing but on this level, i sort of never knew. I am so happy and a bit of proud too that we have such amazing writers in this forum. If you will ask me, i can literally drop down any story but not this one, i swear!

So the wonder woman, coming to you super nice chapter i would definitely say i loved it, probably Simi's part was quiet good for the story or might be for the chapter but it felt nice to read another entry in the story between Swayam-Sharon and that kinda made the chapter more on light and content side for me. Approve

Definitely, i can see improvement in Swayam's character which is pathetically amazing and fun now to read, not like it wasn't before but i am liking this light and a bit free Swayam more which can highly understand and co-operate with Sharon.

For once it was nice to read Sharon as a audience for Simi and Swayam and they both duffer just keep blabbering over nothing but a tux. Oh, yeah that tux part, was frigging hilarious for me. Poor Sharon and her hard toast! ROFL

And yes, Sharon's feeling flowing down now is good, actually good for the flow i guess and keep it same like this. I love it! I love Sharon's soft part a lot as well hard side is f*****g cool too. Same goes for Swayam.



-Marium




Edited by -Marium- - 08 July 2013 at 2:58pm

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