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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 24)

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged

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Kankks! The depiction and your thinking is mindblowing and as you might know putting what you think on a paper (Soft or hard) is a tough job! It is not a very common gift of such outstanding vocabulary and imagination. 

First of all the best part was Sharon's personality depiction at the party. Showing her that she is an alcoholic typical tomboy like me (Wink) and writing in words -- Mate you are A M A Z I N G!

Converses were greatly shown and Sharon's accent is so freaking cool man! The only this is you could actually make it in a little simpler words.. Next please!!

~PS - Sorry Im late. We had a school camping trip of 5 days so.. yeah!
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Sammy


Edited by EmaraldRockstar - 09 July 2013 at 4:21am

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 8:23am | IP Logged
the best part that i have read so far. i just wish i was this free spirited as Sharon is but i guess only fictional characters have that quality. 
i would like to give a special mention to the details u give about the cars, as me being a car person really enjoy that bit.  i did not think of ford taurus to be a gay car but now i am also starting to think of it that way. 

p.s, what is the scene in your display pic gif. 

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Awesome update..Simmi character was unexpected but i liked her as a integradient between SwaRon..Loved the bond of simmi and sharon..Their convo was good..Sharon was staring him..That was nice description of emotion of sharon after grave visit..Food talking was nice..They enjoyed a good time and loved the understanding of sharon..The update was beautifully written in sharon POV..So now,i am really interested for next chapter..Keep going..

Thanx for PM

Prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 07 July 2013 at 5:09am

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged
kanks, i liked how sharon is starting to fall in love---and still she knows rhea's place in both of their lives.

and again---rhea is still watching over him----

simmi was delightful.

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged

like it superb

 
nyc  chpter
 
plz frnds jjoin cc  n book mark
 


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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
AWsummm... story... thnxx fr pm
sorry Im late... <3

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Posted: 06 July 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
wow !!

awesome... super awesome...
loved it !!

awe poor swayam and his gay car !! lol
great update again... ty so much for the pm !

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