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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 18)

kamlesh32 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Nice chapter! I loved how you described the tension between swayam and his dad Clap 
Thanks for the pm and waiting for the next update!


Edited by kamlesh32 - 03 July 2013 at 4:11pm

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
just read part 4 & 5..
both were beautifully written.. Clap
loved the way u described the situations...
willing to read more..
waiting for the next part..
thanks for them PM Big smile

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Entry of father at some points remainds me of father of krish from two states ..
I just loved this sharon..

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Last three chapters were an heck of an update. And I am more than happy to learn you'd be updating everyday. It cheers up my mood. Approve

Coming to the updates, I really love the way you have written them, and the way you are so intelligently proceeding with the story-line. It's become a pleasure to read this story.

Your writing is what keeps up the audience up with the story, not that I criticize anything of any sort..

Loved it. :')



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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 3:26am | IP Logged
awesomeee updateClapClap
lovedd d way how sharon consoled swayamStar
well-writtenSmile
waitng for d nxt partEmbarrassed

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
A wonderful story.. hoping to get pm's on this..have added ur buddy ac..!!

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Wonderful...Clap The way you are building the story... With every update we get something new... The past comes around... Bravo gal, keep writing... ( And Updating so that we can read!LOL)

Edited by damonTVDrocks - 04 July 2013 at 4:21am

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Posted: 04 July 2013 at 4:48am | IP Logged
hey must say quick at updates 
but i am sorry for late comments 
but this was an awesome update loved it 

update soon like this
will be waiting for the pm

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