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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 17)

paro1311 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 10:58am | IP Logged
Like the sub plots u r bringing in here.. dont know if thrs more to it but thrs a elder brother a douchebag of a dad nd sharon's "feeling better".
Loving the demented sharon more with every chapter.. nd excited for the next one cos its her side of the story :)

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Hey both updates were awesome. Just checked the PMs and read the updates together. Rey is Swayam's brother. WOW Swayam's family is really crazy. His father seems totally like those scary Gumrah type dadsLOLI liked how Sharon cheered him up. The line you write for Sharon are really funny. And they way Swayam's frustration came outShocked I'm glad we'll be getting Sharon's side of the story nowSmileThanks for PMing me. I would have written longer but I'm not in the right state of mind right now

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VickyLover Newbie
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Such an intense chapter...
But ws cute towrds the end...
Swayam is already comfortable with sharon and knows tht he needs her,
She undrstands him and makes him feel bettr and is basicaaly perfect fr him...i bet soon they will b togethr...they jus to realise and accept it...
thnkxx fr the PM...do pm me fr the next chap too
early waitin fr it to b postd...
loved your writin Big smile

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:29am | IP Logged

Awos m

 
love it ClapClap

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dazedworld Goldie
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
yet another amazing update...
i really loved rey's guest appearance here though..

aah papa shekhawat... i never really liked him much... he's pain !

sharon aah my dearest... i loved her the most today... and swayam's out burst was the peek point of today's update...

do continue soonest and ty for the pm !

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
kanks, this update left me sad, because of swayam's past,

but its amazing the way rhea left him upon her death, yet she still reaches out to him---takes care of him through others.

your plot seems well thought out---and---its getting good.

love--medha

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surbhimathur IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
I love sharon!! She is so cool man, saviour in a true sense!
Swayam's father is depressing, poor family n rey.
I am damn curious to read sharon's point of view and more than that her state of mind.
She is epic, Na Na Na Seriously ? LOL
But i definitely love her.
Looking forward to the next one.

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trisha19 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
nice update...Clap
waiting for sharon's POV...
thanks for daily updates...Big smile

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