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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 17)

dazedworld Goldie
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged
yet another amazing update...
i really loved rey's guest appearance here though..

aah papa shekhawat... i never really liked him much... he's pain !

sharon aah my dearest... i loved her the most today... and swayam's out burst was the peek point of today's update...

do continue soonest and ty for the pm !

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ToujoursPur IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
kanks, this update left me sad, because of swayam's past,

but its amazing the way rhea left him upon her death, yet she still reaches out to him---takes care of him through others.

your plot seems well thought out---and---its getting good.

love--medha

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surbhimathur IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
I love sharon!! She is so cool man, saviour in a true sense!
Swayam's father is depressing, poor family n rey.
I am damn curious to read sharon's point of view and more than that her state of mind.
She is epic, Na Na Na Seriously ? LOL
But i definitely love her.
Looking forward to the next one.

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trisha19 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
nice update...Clap
waiting for sharon's POV...
thanks for daily updates...Big smile

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kamlesh32 Senior Member
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Nice chapter! I loved how you described the tension between swayam and his dad Clap 
Thanks for the pm and waiting for the next update!


Edited by kamlesh32 - 03 July 2013 at 4:11pm

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prakriti4u Senior Member
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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
just read part 4 & 5..
both were beautifully written.. Clap
loved the way u described the situations...
willing to read more..
waiting for the next part..
thanks for them PM Big smile

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Entry of father at some points remainds me of father of krish from two states ..
I just loved this sharon..

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Posted: 03 July 2013 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Last three chapters were an heck of an update. And I am more than happy to learn you'd be updating everyday. It cheers up my mood. Approve

Coming to the updates, I really love the way you have written them, and the way you are so intelligently proceeding with the story-line. It's become a pleasure to read this story.

Your writing is what keeps up the audience up with the story, not that I criticize anything of any sort..

Loved it. :')



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