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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 14)

prateek.007 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 9:12am | IP Logged
                                                        Un_reserved

                                                          Chapter 3

Beautifull update..i always loved u'r starting naration of any update..Swayam was doing his pending works and then sharon came with full of excitement..Its just a treat to read sharon in u'r update.."Completely different but most interesting character for me"..Just loved the way u add each and every simple stuff in u'r update..Sharon and her car's relation was good to read..Description part of woods is amazing..i enjoyed little bit funny antics of SwaRon in that...Jonny jonny part was funny...i really like the words of Sunrise description..And last loved the curiosity of swayam..So now i am just looking forward to see revealation of Sharon as a character..

Sorry but for chapter 3, i did'nt got u'r PM..
 
Prateek


Edited by prateekdave7 - 03 July 2013 at 9:18am

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged
love the chapter as usual...
beautifully writtn...and extremly emotional...

Thnxx fr the pm and do continue and pm me bout the nxt chap as well...
Hope swaron gt togethr soon and sharon doesnt replace ria but makes another place of hr own in swayams heart and lifewhich is equally important... Wink

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shivheena123 Senior Member
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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Wow! It was a great chapter! Loved the way you explained the emotions and feelings of both Swayam and Sharon! It was such a pleasure to read.mplease update quick as I want to know what will happen next!

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kamlesh32 Senior Member
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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Awesome update! I love the way you write...it's so descriptiveSmile
Thanks for the pm and update soon...

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
kankshita---the whole write up was so stark---and true---it was haunting-----you know the end with death---yet the way the dead we love never truly leave us---another quote from harry potter

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dazedworld Goldie
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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
gay car ?!!? lol...

on a serious note i enjoyed reading it...
amazing ! i'm your fan... i could relate to it to an extent..

wow ! ty so much for the pm !

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Beautiful update sweety..
ur marvelous..
just loved it..
Plz update soon and thanxx 4 tha pm... LOL Clap Clap

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Posted: 02 July 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
this work is really amazing...
to be honest living the dream was the first ever work i read on if and till now i have found other great works but nothing can match the level of ltd...its too gud to be true
and in ur work from the font style to the writing style i find a lot of connect with it...
superb workHug

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