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SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 (Page 11)

kamlesh32 Senior Member
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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Amazing chapter! I loved the descriptiveness of it. Im loving swaron's friendship. But why do i have a feeling that sharon used to like swayam ever since college days!?
Thanks for the pm and please update soon! And yeah, it would be awesome if you could update daily!


Edited by kamlesh32 - 30 June 2013 at 11:57am

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
The chapter had so many wonderful things in it. Sharon and Swayam's odd friendship, the dawn, Sharon's bond with her car and then their parting, each part described beautifully. Though, I am confused here how the story will move forward if Sharon's leaves the city, I'm sure you must be having something real nice ready for it. 
As far as the updates are considered, we're fine with anything. But daily updates will definitely be wonderful.
Thanks for the PM. =)

-Shreya and Kanishtha. 


Edited by muzzy_sk - 30 June 2013 at 12:05pm

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
wow... simply wow...
i thoroughly enjoyed this chapter...

it was indeed magical !
loved sharon !

pls do continue soon and ty for the pm !

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Great update.
That was a gorgeous sunrise.I could visualize it and it was beautiful.Loved the symbolism.
Sharon is like a breath of fresh air that Swayam is too lost in his grief to resist.
He is healing and that is good to knowApprove
Regarding updates,you know the answer.Daily,of course!

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Great chapter... Loved the description about the lawn... 10 chapters... i wish to read them in one go now... I have a feeling that there is something hidden about Sharon...Update soon.

Nehal

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
great start. loved all d three chapter penned dem down brilliantly.. likg dis new Swaron.. Looking forward to nxt update
Thanks to deepika for the pmHug

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
Edited my post on pg : 9


PS: You updated chapter 3 already? Why didn't i know of it?


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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Kankshita i am sorry, was occupied with some work as you mentioned in the list of your obvious reasons, but i made a point to read this one, as couldn't afford to avoid your creation.
And yes even i can understand how it feels if someone doesn't pay heed to your write-ups, so sorry once again.
Now i will proceed LOL
My eyes are heavy but your portrayal of the first chapter allured me to go further with it.
I like your technique of writing, you put just one word to it and its enough for us to gauge it.
Sharon's description is i can say i have never read anywhere so its different but mysterious too with positive attitude n unpredictable reactions but anyways her character has not yet unfolded so i can chill Stern Smile But i like her. She has brought some positive vibes in swayam's life.
And swayam here is shaken up totally, his narration was quite amazing in the start of the story, where he came to know that he had nothing of his own and how he felt not so comfortable in crying, even when alone.
Ah, i really liked your ref. author's note in every chapter. But I loved the jane austen n JK's!
Okay so i would be regular with my comments as you deserve on this truly.
And i like the progress of your updates, keep updating once or twice in a week, as it would give us a little time to comment. Rest depends on the patentee herself LOL

And these three were,for me eye-opening-updates Stern Smile (Sry,Too lameLOL)
Stupefying kankshita Clap 
can i call you kanks? Ermm
Keep it going, the concept is truly fantastic. Thumbs Up

And i m done now Approve

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