SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 - Page 35

I keep falling harder in love with Sharon with every update.Her fear and anxiety when faced with the prospect of joining the straight faces was deliciously quirky.
She's a hoot and now seems to have company in Reyansh.
I have no idea where this story is heading and that's proof of your brilliance.

awesome update 

Chapter 12 - Loved the open conversation between the two. It's like there is nothing that these two have to hide from each other. As always, your write ups always have a very humorous edge to them and I really like that. It was a very nice read. Beautifully described, especially Swayam thinking about Rhea.


Chapter 13 - Hilarious chapter, I don't know why I found it very funny. The entire scene where Sharon was conversing with 3 people at the same time on different subjects was humorous. Also, Sharon acknowledging the fact that she loves Swayam was great. I liked the chapter a lot. Thanks for the PM

sharon and swayam back to being the best buddies..

Hey Kanks, plzzz update... It's been long time since you last updated...😕

awesome..!!
srry i am late..

I want update! 😳

                                                        Chapter-12

Sorry for my previous short comment..Now i am moving with chapter,Actually it was emotional chapter for me..The way u described whole scene,was beautifull..All the potrayel of emotions was amazingly described..i loved that..Its really great finally swayam and sharon both started to work things out regarding current situation..Loved their friendly conversation..very well written..Swayam's compliment to sharon as a Hott..really amazing..i liked the dialouges most...So it was awesome part as usual..
And yes,Nice Quotation above in the chapter..

Thanx for PM

Prateek
Edited by prateekdave7 - 10 years ago

                                                         Chapter-13

Great update..Truly,loved the sharon in this update..Again u wrote such a mindblowing conversation..Loved each and every dialouges..Swayam was also perfect in this scene..Sharon forgive him and they are again friends now..I think the update was funny too..I enjoyed shekawats convo's with sharon..So in whole,it was enjoyable update..Keep it up..I am just looking forward to read such conversations again..Great work

Thanx for PM
And sorry for late comment,I know u never mind..😆

Prateek
Edited by prateekdave7 - 10 years ago

Gahh! Have you abandoned this one, too?😕