SwaRon FF: Smithereens | the final chapter: PG 68 | 10 Nov'14 - Page 14

Last three chapters were an heck of an update. And I am more than happy to learn you'd be updating everyday. It cheers up my mood.

awesomeee update👏👏

A wonderful story.. hoping to get pm's on this..have added ur buddy ac..!!

Wonderful...👏 The way you are building the story... With every update we get something new... The past comes around... Bravo gal, keep writing... ( And Updating so that we can read!😆) Edited by damonTVDrocks - 10 years ago

hey must say quick at updates 

Swayam's dad is the typical men-don't-cry-coz-emotions-are-for-pansies patriarch,isn't he?😲 I feel sad for such people.
I can see a lot of similarities between father and son though,the difference is Sr didn't have a Sharon to ass-kick him out of his rut.
Speaking of whom,I absolutely LOVE Sharon so plz tell me that you are not planning to kill her as well.Her reaction to the father-son showdown which she watched with 'fascinated gaiety,she almost treated it like an exciting basketball match' had me cracking up.She is a rockstar😆
Great job,looking forward to reading it from Sharon's p.o.v.
p.s -kudos on using such apt quotes everytime.

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loved both 4 n 5 chapters
sorry was quite busy so unresing now..

swayam was doing well i mean job n all..
he went see her aww..
what she is hidding really wanna know..
she was unwell but still very cheerful..
the place they went was beautiful i can imagine that😊
they went to rhea grave also..really so nice..
how sharon support swayam was so nice..

i loved father n son convo..well written 👍🏼
sharon here is so amazing..
i loving her more 😊
want to know more about sharon..

awesome update😃
thanks for the pm 😊


Edited by anushka1129 - 10 years ago

This by far is the most intriguing story I've read..

and I love This Sharon more than I normally do 😆
 

beautiful update..!!
😆 m feelin kuch kuch ho raha h swayam ko..!!!
haha..!!
plz update soon..!!
i just love ur updates..!!😳
👏👏👏

Amazing update again!