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ArHi FF:7:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 97)

russelskhushi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 1:09am | IP Logged
wow what more could we ask for! ...such an amazing update... khushi is soo brave...i must give her a big applause ...
things are definitely going to change from here..hope arnav to realizes that.. 
loved the update...

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-memorable- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
she couldn't stay away from arnav :)

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Mouktika Groupbie

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Excellent this is becoming amazingly romantic and beautiful slowly making me hard to wait.

Thank u

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aspalas Groupbie

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:16am | IP Logged
That was INTENSE...splendid...Clap

On top of that...continuous updates...Thank U darling...u r a swt hrt...Tongue

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
OMG! WHAT WAS THIS! My heart is beating sooo wildly in my ribcage. Lin it was terrific when Khushi said again dat she wont sleep in the cage i had tht smile on my face i felt it so cute. Khushi went to open da door n also tried to help lordy in removing his coat sweet. But u lordy i got so angry on u when u didnt allow her n moved away but later we got to know y awww felt attracted towards ur wifey na? She was too hard to resist na *cocking eyebrows in NK style* ah u n ur stubbornness SERIOUSLY... Aww is it difficult to sleep on da same bed bolo bolo... Oh god now the part which made me hold my breath. Oh god! When he left the food n sniffed the air I was abt to shout RUN but controlled... The crouching scene was so horrifying n then y did u fight khushi. The bite oh god! Thts the reason he has tht tongue the burning fire feeling wali tongue god! Then his worry for khushi but Lordy y r u worrying for her kahey babuwa? So he destroyed the cage n his attempt to recover her back... Just awesomeee update now he wants khushi to sleep with anjali for her safety. I just loved the whole update but most importantly the part where arnav says never again n the last when anjali says khushi is n always will b urs n he repeated it in her mind.
Btw isnt it unusual from any kind of animal tht Lordy 1st lick the food like he is making his tongue to b familiar with taste n then eat it. I m using the word animal coz he have to b tranforrmed in an animal coz of curse ... Loved da update lin

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 17 August 2013 at 1:24pm

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:57am | IP Logged
Chapter 183
loved the update... Lordy caressing her cheek when she was sleeping as if he was making sure she was real his confirmation tht she was ok cause my heart filled with warmth... Felt a tug at my heart feeling sympathy for him... Dont know y but I felt really sad for him... Though I cant blame Khushi for wht she said but seriously I felt bad for Lordy... Oh wao his gaze to her lips reminded him of his 1st kiss n he wanted to kiss her again but damn this interruption... An almost kiss in Arhasia too.
''''''''when Lord Arnav paused in
the middle of the stairway and looked down
sadly at the closed door below within which
his wife was.'''''''
I though I couldnt feel more sorry for him but u proved me wrong oh god feeling sooo sorry for him. His only way to cure n happiness n he is keeping her away. I wonder he never wondered at how he controlled his beasty self near Khushi. Awww she didnt feel ok leaving her husband'sv room n wanted to pay a visit making an excuse. Awww I just loved this part
"What will you have then, your majesty?" She
dared him.
A cunning light shone in his eyes and the
candlelight in the room flickered against his
face, "You really want me to tell you."
Kushi gulped, but tried to keep a straight
face, "I think it would be judicious to hear it
some other day. Tonight I am sleepy and
Lady Anjali awaits my presence."
"Alright," he released her, "I will let you run
now, kitten, but I will get you one day. And
then I shall not spare you and you will find
no escape."
"We'll see," Kushi said, as she made for the
door as quickly as she could without
seeming too flustered.
"We certainly will."
loved it sooo much

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 18 August 2013 at 11:53am

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Res 3 will unres all three one by one till tomorrow eve promise
chapter 184
It was undeed reaching out of a wife to her husband of a girl in love to her lover. Khushi was unable to sleep n kept wondering abt Lordy's beasty self. She now knew fighting him in tht state in not good n safe. Loved how Khushi loaded herself wid food n took it to his room n her inner fight awesome. And then again u weaved magic awesome just awesome perfect... How he tried to be away from her angry n fear in his eyes... Then when Khushi offered apple I wanted to hug her... N the part where she said I am scared n dont hurt me plz she was terrfied yet she didnt left him... And how even in his beasty form he took care of her comfort n laid her down n then this time it was over soon. And when at the ending he just lay over her having her in his arms n she too wounded her arms around him n both slept it was too touche... Lin u r an exceptional writer really loved all three updates sorry for late unres just read them n i want more.
P.S Do u feel I have lost the charm of my regular commenting I felt so

Edited by -Farwa_Ibrahim- - 18 August 2013 at 12:29pm

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prabha75 Senior Member

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 4:48am | IP Logged
excellent superb parts 183&184

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