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ArHi FF:7:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES (Page 71)

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
loved the update :)

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Loved it...

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Khushi must have looked so beautiful, I can imagine it! It was a very feel-good chapter. And the timing of it was perfectly right, after the last few harrowing chapters. You are doing everything right, Linnie. And my respect for your talent grows with each chapter. :)

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Hey lin,
 
Surprise update... a nice one...my favorite part was Lordy watching khushi eat... just the fact that she was relishing it like a kid...probably lordy felt like doing that...and with all responsibilities and duties..he was never able to enjoy food with his family...he just used to do it as per tradition.. slowly khushi will make Arnav look at those things which he has missed in his life... in his relations...as predicted by Anjali in the end...khushi will melt his cold heart...may be process has already begun...
 
Loved it...
 
Take Care

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
lovely !!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged
What a great way to start my Saturday morning!  Nicely written!  As always, anxious for more...

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
I was counting on a little more of the Sisters conversation. Anything...tht involved Lady Payal enquire 'The First lady' about the events of last night...if lordy treated her just fine? if she was okay? anything! 

okay...I was literally frowning everytime ppl were refrerring to khushi as 'My Lady'. I know thry r not to be blamed...and it is something they hve to oblige to...even if their hearts are not into it. But, the point of my concern is Khushi. Yup..that is wat I m gonna refer to her always. I feel bad for her tht she's being subjected to 'the title'.. alien to her when she's at its receiving end.

But then..I loved the whole of Lunch scene. Them colliding...his eyes reflexively going over to neck hidden under the collar...khushi forgetting her worries for the moment...and then her eating so leisurely.  Lordy's frown intitially...oh! did I sense enviousness there? and then...stolen glances of admiration...and not to forget, the proximity tht he couldn't but go over agn nd agn in his mind. Tht part ws quite an awesome read. Clap

And then, the final part, Lady Anjali's line of thinking...I couldn't help but mentally wink and stifle a laugh assumed to be shared with her. *crazy acts of mine...I know Big smile*

And the Prakash brothers...ahh! they have always been really adorable. With them, I could literally feel khushi relaxing a little despite the title-ship being enforced. it ws so much...atleast much better than..in case of servant who came to collect laundary. And the Jayprakash...well at times I really do feel like cudddling him. Him sprawled on floor and all...I m sure had I been there too...I would have laughed till tears. He made such a cute sight.

And it was indeed quite surprising tht despite khushi making repetitive plans to visit her sister first in morning, yet she was drawn to Nani's room first. Nani...offcourse being the motherly figure she is, comforted her and treated her just like she used to. Tht ws most sweet thing.

In all...no doubt the updte ws as amazing as ever.Linny u rock!



Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 06 August 2013 at 9:21am

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Posted: 03 August 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Wawo,
Khushi and payal making themselves accustomed to the castle etiquette too soon...
specially, khushi, who is known for her clumsiness and her mischiefs...
good to notice that arnav is highly conscious about khushi and her actions, may it b eating, walking or drinking... 
Khushi, quite clever, planning to probe rahim chacha, for some kind of revelations...
m eagerly waiting, for some kind of confrontation between the first lord and his Lady...

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